Season of Memories

[VinSRedMoon]

Season of Memories

The season is ever wonderful
Because of the special you

Spring, of the blooming flowers
We sat under the shadiest tree
Listening to the bird’s cheerful tune
Watch the butterflies dance gracefully

Summer, of the rising sun
Strolling down the beach, hand in hand
Watch the wave crushes against the shore
Admire the seagull of its freedom
Admire its ability to sore in the sky

Autumn, of the shedding trees
Watch as the golden brown leaves fall
Fall onto the fading grass
Gleaming low in yellow light

Winter, of the pure snow
Admiring you in the quiet embrace
Connecting us to the winter wonderland
A place, only you and me
Your love laid my heart
Leaving it warm

Staying with you
There is no stress
Only happiness

[Isis]

You have an interesting concept for this poem but there were some words which disrupted the flow slightly.

Watch the wave crushes against the shore
I think there's too many syllables in this line, perhaps use another word for crushes?

Anyway, I enjoyed it. I got the meaning behind it quite nicely :)

[VinSRedMoon]

haha..thx..and i will tak note of tat

[>BANKAI RIROU<]

hey i have asentence for you to <make your life happy whit your`s poetry>

[VinSRedMoon]

Sick Of

My breathing is deep
My body is numb
Numb with sadness

My heart seem to stop
As I shivered in fear
Fear of the darkness

My skin seem dry
Dried by intense anger
Anger of the selfish self

Time seem frozen
Darkness slowly creeps in
Corrupting my mind

I wish I could break free
Sick of this insane World
A place full of discrimation
Where kindness seem endanger

What is there to be done?
I am sick of this insane World