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Dark Fire
03-30-2007, 11:28 AM
W0ot this one it totally bleach also this isn't a final draft but c&c it anyway....


Sword in hand I pour my soul into the blade

I fight in the shadows, I fight in the shade

In my mind I hide from my unnamed demon

I push him aside, I pray not to see him

For we are the same

The dark and untame

We each, struggle for control forgetting all and letting go

Each time a part of me dies and it's starting to show

I swalow my pride

As I begin to turn the tide

I must rely upon others

My comrades, my brothers

For they strengthen me

For they brighten me

Cutting through the shadows

Drowding all the sorrows

Forcing my darkness away

So with them I'll stay

>BANKAI RIROU<
03-30-2007, 11:29 AM
i cry hear your poetry

Sabishii
03-30-2007, 11:30 AM
wow thats nice haha.. seem just like ichigo

Dark Fire
03-30-2007, 11:43 AM
Thanx Sabishii thats what I was going for

>BANKAI RIROU< I don't quite understand what you are trying to say

>BANKAI RIROU<
03-30-2007, 12:02 PM
The mean of that i like your poetry... your poetry make me touched

Dark Fire
03-30-2007, 12:07 PM
ohh ok TY.....

>BANKAI RIROU<
03-30-2007, 12:12 PM
by the way wuod you became a friend of me and at my rep. power Dark Fire

Dark Fire
03-30-2007, 12:15 PM
I'll add you as a friend but I WILL NOT ABUSE THE REP SYSTEM out of fear of DB wrath

>BANKAI RIROU<
03-31-2007, 05:01 AM
ok But don`t say like that to me
B...E...C...A...M...E A.....F...R...I...E...N...D

boredomlover93
04-01-2007, 07:56 AM
that was hard core. i liked it heaps!! ^^ keep up the good work!