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Sabishii
03-30-2007, 12:37 PM
just something i wrote after watching Fate/Stay Night...
first time posting here so be easy on me lol
i wrote this as if it was coming from shirou point of view.

Her Pain

I can see it in your eye’s glowing in the moon light
Staring at me as you appear from the magic circle
Summoned to do battle seeking that final wish
How I was surprise to see such a beautiful girl
With a sad smile you show me your goals
Reaching out your hand as you ask me my name
Even though you look pleased but I can still see your pain

I couldn’t say anything as I watch you from the darkness
For a girl to be my sword was not what I had in mind
I was willing to put my life on the line to protect you from all harm
But you neglected me and said I was only doing wrong
Even though I promised to call out your name
I couldn’t bear seeing you hurt and put to shame
So let me be the only one to end your pain.
Saber

Askand
04-09-2007, 01:08 AM
*speeachless* Wow this is full of feeling and flow. IS really agood work Sab, I hope you could come up with more works like this one. I could picture Shinrou's dilema about Saber and Saber well strong yet at the same time delicate like a porcelain girl. ^^ Yup I like it, it move me and my heart.
*BIG GRINS*

Sabishii
04-09-2007, 10:19 AM
thx :) glad ya liked it