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Dark Fire
04-02-2007, 10:22 AM
My serene insanity
of Darkness and Vanity

through thoughts and dreams
of sobs and screams.

My madness is calling
as the city is falling

the destruction it brings
and a wickedness of all things

the corpses it feeds on
the horrific demon

the destruction it brought
has begun to decay and rot

what I fail to see
is this demon is me

the cracking of bones
my musical tones

swing the sword
and killing the hoard

the unholy gladness
I am lost in this madness

the essence of my being
has kept me from fleeing

Mighty Aramir
04-02-2007, 10:56 PM
Hmmm dark yet the end is a bit disapointing...
for th rest, is very good!

Dark Fire
04-03-2007, 08:05 AM
yah it's not finished I had just run out of ideas I'll edit it when I am done