The Creative Writing Thread

[SakuraNeko]

yup... guess we are

[SakuraNeko]

* hope this is ok to do*
This is just a thread for fun and release your creativity (something we did in the academy during class 8)

Basically the objective of this thread is to create any kind of writing (poem, short story, song, limerick, interview, article, joke, blog, etc.) and you make it up in one condition:

You have to use 5 words or phrases stated by the poster above.

Example:

poster #1 makes a story, then sets 5 words which are:

-donkey
-Uruguay
-knock out
-mushroom farm
-waiting

poster #2 then creates a limerick using those five words, then sets his 5 words for the next poster

You can also use similar words, example: poster specified run, but you can use running and ran instead of run.

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I'll start with the example words:

During their trip to Uruguay, Melissa and her parents rode on a wagon that was pulled by a donkey. The wagon brought them to the mysterious mushroom farm. "Be careful of the ominous caterpillar for the smoke from his hookah will knock out anyone who breaths it In" Said the man that held the reins of the wagon. as the wagon pulled off Melissa and her parents looked around at where they were. they suddenly found themselves sitting in the middle of the mushroom farm patiently waiting for the Caterpillar to give them directions home.

Now my words for the next poster are

-Pot
-Candy
-Japan
-pink
-vanilla

[Tsuki Garyuu]

(Do the words need to be in order?)

During the entire plan ride, Marco had always held onto his lucky pot. At certain times he puts a lot of different snacks in that pot; this time he stored candy of many different flavors inside. His destination point was Tokyo, Japan. As he walked the streets eating his candy, Marco met a certain girl with her hair dyed pink. She asked if she could taste one of his candies, Marco felt generous. Once he gave the girl a vanilla flavored candy, she jumped in excitment the moment she tasted it.

[SakuraNeko]

(Do the words need to be in order?)

No they don't need to be in order. ^_^

[M-50]

ill sticky this and add my one later.

[SakuraNeko]

Ok... thankies rohil....
@ BeserkerXII what are the new words for the next person to use? (have to post 5 new words after your story or poem)

[Tsuki Garyuu]

Hm.....let's see...

-devil
-fork
-heart
-will
-twilight

easy huh? ^^

[SakuraNeko]

The Path to my Afterlife
By: SakuraNeko
Deep within the Twilight,
As the trees fall from my sight,
My Heart beats slower and slower
Till my heart beat fades,
And I awaken in the forest glades.
Before me is the spirit of the forest,
She speaks to me,
Her voice like that of an Angelic chorus.
The forest path splits in two,
Like a fork in a road,
Choose that path that is true,
For one will lead you to the Summer lands,
The other to the devil's lair.
Do not despair,
For you will find which path is true.
All you need to do,
Is Concentrate.
Her voice echoes off in the wind,
Like a voice in my unconscious mind,
I close my eyes and listen,
listen to the sounds of nature for guidance
And I choose a path to my afterlife.

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Words:
-Death
-life
-choice
-Family
-Friends

[Tsuki Garyuu]

I can't help but GASP!!!!:biggrinki It went pretty well.

[SakuraNeko]

thanks I have a talent for poetry ... to a degree of course... Can't draw for beans tho.

[M-50]

I live in a world of death. My life is non existent in this world of death. I have no choice in the way I live my life in this world of death. My family are gone from me as I had no choice whether or not i could keep them in this world of death. I was lucky to have friends with my non existent choice of keeping my family in tis world of death. i am a sperm which fertilized the egg.

New words

wicked
gross
amazing
blah
addidas hoodie
good luck!!
good luck is not a word just what i am saying to the next person.

[SakuraNeko]

Wow! rohil that was good... I liked it.
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As Maria walked in to school in her amazing new Adidas's hoodie that she bought just yesterday, She over heard some kids laughing at another kid that was in her class because she did not have cool clothed. Maria walked over to the evil boys and they looked at her and said "WOW! thats a wicked hoodie you have on." She just glared at them. she removed her hoodie and beneath it was a Tee shirt that she got at the Gross Concert. The boys started laughing at her too and calling her names. 'you decide to make fun of this girl because of her clothes, well shes no different than me." she stated. but all the boys heard was blah, blah, blah. She gave her hoodie to her classmate and walked with her to school.
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Reunited
High School
party
yearbook
sweet

[M-50]

thanks naeko. my turn. btw kensei started one like this in the pens and quill section.

I was reunited in my high school party where I took out my yearbook and a sweet fell in it and stained my loves picture. I got up, punched the living lights out of the girl that dropped the sweet and realised that it was my love. I immedietley got out my gun and gave it to her so she could shoot me in the leg. She didnt. I like to think she had a bad aim. She got my genitals instead. I cried and died. I am telling this story by writing with a chalk on a school blackboard while freaking the students out.


new words

astrophysics
dark matter and dark energy
wormholes
faster than light travel
'the earth was destroyed but we managed to bring it back to life by travelling back in time'

[SakuraNeko]

One question Do you watch Stargate? And thanks

* need to think id story will post it later*

[M-50]

Yeah sometimes, do you? I got those words as they are things I am interested in.

[SakuraNeko]

*its the year 2010* (yes huge gate fan... This was an episode title)
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Sam was at dinner with Jack, Daniel and Teal'c talking about the theory of wormholes and how they form. Carter uses astrophysics to explain her theory and how they could save the earth if one day they needed to do so. " so all wee need to go is calculate when the next solar flare will be and Open the Stargate at that precise time in order to travel back in time" As Carter continues to talk, O'Neil Shouts "CARTER!"
"Yes sir."
"that's enough...No more techno babble . Ok?"
"Yes sir." Carter stated.


The Gate opens suddenly. "no arrivals were scheduled for today" Daniel states
"Indeed" Teal'c agreed
All of a sudden a bomb comes through the gate and blows up not only the building but the earth as well.
Sam, jack, Daniel, and Teal'c wake up on Thor's ship. "what happened?" carter asked. " A bomb made up of bother dark matter and dark energy destroyed earth" Thor answered
"dark matter and dark energy?" Carter questioned
"Yes" said Thor.
"but... But thats impossible" carter added
"Who sent this bomb" Teal'c asked
"Unknown" Thor answered.
"Could you bring us to the nearest stargate? Carter asked
"sure" Thor answered.

Within a few moment they arrived at a planet called Shoya.
Thor beamed then to the surface neat the gate. Crater began to dial the coordinates for earth.
"Carter?" O'Neil asked
"Sir On while On thors ship I used the sensors to search or this suns next solar Flair. the flair will be now." she said as she activated the gate.
they walked through and they were greeted by Hammond.
"welcome Home SG-1" he stated "Now tell me what happened?" he asked as they walked to the briefing room.

Well sir," Carter began " we need to be aware of the ashen and not deal with them and because of them the earth was destroyed but we managed to bring it back to life by traveling back in time"
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Egypt
gods
Cats
Celtic
music


just changed a spelling mistake in there.

[M-50]

nice one. good way you brought the ashen into it. were they the ones that managed to prevent any babies from being born?
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In my homeland of egypt my daddy said to me that one day the gods will come.
In my homeland of egypt my daddy said to me that one day the gods will come and all the cats will be struck down.
In my homeland of egypt my daddy said to me that one day the gods will come, all the cats will be struck down and the celtic people will die out.
In my homeland of egypt my daddy said to me that one day the gods will come, all the cats will be struck down, the celtic people will die out and there will be music playing.
Then I said to my dad:
If in my homeland of egypt my daddy said to me that one day the gods will come, all the cats will be struck down, the celtic people will die out and there will be music playing, then wont we die because we are the derivitave of the celtic lineage?



bombard,
destroy,
the hammer of thor,
goauld,
resistance is futile.

do u only watch gate or atlantis as well?

[SakuraNeko]

nice one. good way you brought the ashen into it. were they the ones that managed to prevent any babies from being born?
do u only watch gate or atlantis as well?
Thanks... Yes the Ashen are the ones who prevent any babies from being born. I watch both... story to come later...(At work):biggrinki

[M-50]

cool. i look forward to it. come one everyone else why not join in?

[Tsuki Garyuu]

Maxfell was astounded setting his sights upon the very light in front him. The appeared inside a shrine opon the edge of the cliff. As Maxfell went inside he saw a goauld with a hammer attached to it. As he stood closer to it, he sees an inscription in a strange langauge.

"Only those worthy of of my power can control it and fight. Grasp the hammer of thor and face me in combat!"

Very curious about this offer, Maxfell grasped the hammer. The moment he did, the hammer glowed tremendously. Mafell could not let go. As the hammer glowed, the shrine quickly dissolved. The shrine melted and destroyed with Maxfell with it. As the shrine disappeared, a shilouette of Maxfell remained. His whole body lit up and he was automatically transformed. He managed to wield the hammer of thor as if it was light as a feather. But before he could celebrate, Maxfell felt a strange aura and looked across the sea near the edge of the cliff. He sees a shadow of a giant figure standing on a nearby rock formation. As light a storm brew, the lightning bombarded nearby the formation and the shadow was revealed.

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8763/myrmidonft5.jpg

A strange myrmidon figure jumped from the formation at a very long distance. It was heading towards Maxfell ready to swing its giant blade. Maxfell manage to jump long enough to dodge the myrmidon's onslought. The landing of the blade destroyed the entire cliff edge. Maxfell managed to land on undamaged ground. He stared at the myrmidon as it actually spoke. "Resistance is futile. If you are truly worthy of the hammer of thor, you must strike me with everything you have!" The myrmidon sets the blade upon its back, ready to swing again. Maxfell also sets the hammer in swinging position. The two were paused for minutes to spare. But as lightning struck again, the two stepped foward. The myrmidon dived its blade towards Maxfell. He too swung the hammer with all the strength he recieved. The weapons collided and bounced off a lot of vibration to the land. The two were, however, evenly matched. Not being able to force off the blade, Maxfell instead tilted the myrmidon's blade. It was off balanced long enough for Maxfell to jump and slam the hammer on top of the myrmidon's head. With the tremendous force of thor, the amored of the myrmidon was completely shatterd. The myrmidon disappeared in defeat and Maxfell was victorious. However, the hammer began to fade away along with the power given to him. The hammer sets itself into the sky, waiting for the next calling of its new master.

(P.S. I have no idea what goauld is...)

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snowy plain
loyal and just
first sight of kindness
Edo Period
revenge

[SakuraNeko]

Wow those word remind me of the Genbu kaiden manga series to Fushigi Yugi... Will write when i get home.

[Tsuki Garyuu]

Intersting. And I don't even know those series. hehe.

[SakuraNeko]

While in the Library looking for books for her history report on the Edo Period, Saki found a book called the univers of the four gods. She started to read the book and the minute she turned the page she got sucked into the book. She landed in a snowy plain on the outskirts of a main city that looked like ancient china. On her way to the main city she was attacked by many people. One atack was stoped by a tall man with blue hair and he was wearing a blue and gold tunic. "are you alright?" He asked as he hled out his hand for her to take.
When she looked up she saw his kind face and kind smile. She took his and and stood up. "yes im fine, thank you" she answered. This man represented the first sight of kindness she had seen since her arrivial. "Where am I?" she asked
"In the city of Konon." he answered "And you are?
"I'm Saki" she answered
Tamahome took her to meet the emperor. He asker her to tbe the priestess of suzaku and save the city of Konon. Saki agreed and she was told about the celestrial warriors who are loyal and true to the priestess and are also need to summon the god Suzaku.
While searching for the warriors they were attaked by those who sought revenge On the priestess.
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Pink
manga
bunny
fire
feather

[Tsuki Garyuu]

"Look at the stars. The greatest shamans of the past watch over us from those stars." It has been a year since Shironeko's father, Kuroneko, told him that. Ever since, Shironeko looked up towards the stars every night visualizing her mother, whom dissappeared without a trace.
"Ka-san, if I'd why-why you'd left. You left without telling me. If there was ever a chance, I would find you." said Shironeko.
He whispered as he laid upon the hillside. After that, he turned slightly to his right. He noticed a pink bunny scurrying along the hillside. Shironeko immediately sat up, for he was to have ever seen a pink rabbit for the first time. He even felt a nestolgia from seeing it. He remembered his mother saying that she wondered what it would like to find a pink bunny. After all, pink was her favorite color. Shironeko tried to come close, but the rabbit quickly hopped away from him. Even as her went back home, he wondered about the sudden appearence of that rabbit.
The next night, he walked down to the hillside again, with his favorite manga, to see if the rabbit have returned, Unfortunately it did not appear. For a while, he again laid down on the hillside looking at the stars. As he stared, he sees a red glimmer in the sky. That glimmer automatically turned into a vortex of fire. Inside the vortex Shironeko noticed a pink sillouette staring upon him. With no doubt in his mind, he shouted.
"Ka-san. Ka-san!!"
But then the sillouette turned away from Shironeko, moving deep inside the vortex. His shouting could stop the vortex from closing. The vortex then disappeared. Before Shironeko could weaver, he saw a bright light falling down the night sky. A pink feather fell right near him from the ground. As he picked it up, he could not begin to wonder, for he sensed an strange person behind him. He turned.
"Do you wish to meet her, young shaman?" said the mysterious man.
"Father...." said Shironeko. The man interrupted as he placed his hand in front of him.
"They way to the universe....can only be opened by her power. She gave you the key, now you must use it."
"Ka-san......gave this to me?" said Shironeko as he stared at the feather.
"Her power alone, even now as a goddess, cannot stop that very flame that could bring the destruction of both worlds. Now that she has given us the key, we can move between the worlds and help her." explained Kuroneko.
"She's......a goddess?" said Shironeko.
"Yes. All of these years in which she disappeaered, she came the other world to be granted the power. She even fought all this time. But now she needs our help Shironeko! We need the power the become gods ourselves, and prevent the flames from entering this world as well. Concentrate your shamanic powers on that feather, and call out her name."

Shironeko foucused as much as he could. For that he managed to give the energy to the feather as it glowed drastically. She shouted.

Sakura Neko!!!!!!!!!!

(So yeah, it was for you.:winking56 )

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Epitaph
sky
alter
halbred
Ceberus

[飛雲]

Gavin Mitchell cleared the dust of the tablet; the bright August sun was directly behind his back, perfect. The temperature was just above eighty-nine degrees, a typical weather in the desert. Justin was behind him, looking anxiously to know what the epitaph would reveal.

“Behold! He whom dares to disturb the tomb of Elastriel, Guardian of the Sky, and royal servant of Ra” Gavin slowly recites the epitaph in translation “He, who enters the tomb beyond this step, shall receive the wrath of the Gods”

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Beyond the open door of the tomb (which was bombed open) was an alter of some kind, with four columns supports it with ancient symbols which no doubt would translate more words. Though Justin was well known specialist in this field, but the heliographic on this site was unlike anyone he ever saw before. And he knew the only one who could translate this was Gavin Mitchells, one whom he envies and admire.

“Now this is strange” Gavin said, while studying one of the paintings on the wall, Justin was amazed to see how nice the paintings were persevered.

The picture Gavin was studying was a figure of male with a dog head, which was completely normal in this part but the strangeness was coming from the weapon he/it was holding; a shafted weapon with an axlike cutting blade, beak, and apical spike. “A halberd” Gavin said softy after observation “Halberd was never a weapon of choice in Egypt” That, of course was due to the fact that halberd was unknown to them.

It got stranger when the words beside the figure were the word “Cerberus” The Roman mythical creature that guards the gates of hell. The sun was going down at the moment, and when its light glares through the tomb and touches the painting, the head of the figure suddenly multiplied to three heads.

Then, all of the sudden the door went shut; darkness came through the tomb without a single light. Deep in side, there’s a terrible noise that can not be described.


It sux, I know.
New words:
Evergreen
Vampire
Elegance
Thrust
Kanji

[Tsuki Garyuu]

Nah, as long as you played your part, it's fine. It's not so bad really. That's why it's all "Creative Writing".

[飛雲]

Ah, praying at the last minute... does it work? M'dear?