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girdragon
06-12-2007, 07:35 PM
(Sorry i ment to say Legend Jack)
My sister wrote this story, i hope you like it. It's based off of the anime and manga of Ginga Densetsu Weed. It's about wild dogs so dog lovers will love this.
Intro:
In a small town near the Japan Alps, a strange dog was brought to a famous dog trainer. At only the age of 1 the dog mastered many attack moves that can take up to 5 years for a dog to learn! When the dog turned 3, he ran away with the other dogs in the town to start his own journey to become the strongest living small breed dog.
girdragon
06-12-2007, 07:41 PM
Chapter One: Wild Nature
In a small farming town near the Japan Alps there was a dog named Johin. He was trained by a famous dog trainer, Yokonewski. The man had trained his dog for many years. This dog was famous for being the all time hunting dog for his smart skills and strong jaw. As time past, Johin got old and Yokonewski trained other dogs. Yokonewski could tame any wild dog.
One day Yokonewski was outside waiting for a desperate owner of a new dog to come. Johin came up to Yokonewski. “It’s alright boy” He said to him petting Johin’s head. Johin was about 12. He was an old dog but still good at hunting and fighting. Johin had only German Shepherd blood in him. Johin heard a car coming and his ears went up. Yokonewski looked to see a car. He walked to the car to see the owner of the new dog. “Hello there, I’m Yokonewski” He said as he put his hand out. The other man put his hand on his and shook it. “My name’s Barren, the dog’s in the back if you want to see him” Yokonewski nodded and went to the back of the dirty car. He opened the trunk to see a 5 month old Bull Terrier.
“He doesn’t look tha-” Yokonewski was interrupted by the Bull Terrier’s bark. The Terrier growled loudly at Yokonewski. Barren quickly went over to the back and put the trunk down. “Does he have a name?” Yokonewski asked Barren, still hearing the dog inside. “No, I want you to train him for awhile” Barren said looking at Johin. “He’s getting old isn’t he?” Yokonewski nodded. “Ya” He looked at his dog. “Tell you what; I’ll take the dog off your hands” Yokonewski told Barren. “Really?! You would do that for me?!” Barren said happily. He never really liked the dog. “Ya, I could use another dog. Besides, I never had a Bull before” Yokonewski said opening the trunk.
The Terrier was still barking. Yokonewski grabbed the cage handle and carried his new dog in the house. “Do I owe you anything?” Barren asked Yokonewski. But he only shook his head. “No, I will just keep him and that’s all. Good doing business with you” Barren nodded. “You too” He said as he went into his car and drove off. Johin watched the car leave. The old dog could tell this Terrier had a mind of his own.
girdragon
06-14-2007, 08:04 PM
Chapter Two: Respect
Yokonewski woke up early the next morning. He kept the Terrier in the cage. Johin was sleeping right next to the cage. Yokonewski told him to move and he banged on the cage. The Terrier woke with a scare. “Get up. It’s time for training” He said. The Terrier started to growl. He opened the cage door and the Terrier ran as fast as he could to the outside door. He head butted the door trying to open it. “You’re smarter then I thought” Yokonewski said as he picked up the young dog. The dog bit his finger and blood started to show. Yokonewski hit the dog on the head then he stopped. The Terrier looked at him. “What should I name you?” Yokonewski thought as he looked around. “I know I will name you Jack” He said to the dog.
When he first saw Jack he thought he was a Jack Russell Terrier. But then he remembered what that breed of dog looked like. Yokonewski smiled at the dog and the young dog licked the man’s finger. Johin looked at Jack and he waged his tail. “Let’s go train now” Yokonewski said putting Jack down and opening the door.
One hot autumn day, Yokonewski trained Jack in many ways. He ran him, made him catch things and most of all made him fight Johin. “Are you ready for this Jack?” He asked the young dog. Jack put his tail down and Johin went into a fighting position. “Go!” Yokonewski said. Johin charged at Jack so fast that he didn’t know what hit him. Jack few in the air then fell down hard onto the ground. “Get up Jack! You can do better then that!” Jack got up. He barred his teeth at the other dog. Johin licked his lips and ran at Jack again. Jack jumped up into the air then grabbed Johin’s ear. He yelped as pain went through him. Johin landed on the ground, letting Jack bite his ear.
Yokonewski’s mouth opened wide at what he saw next. Johin went into a position even he had never seen him do. Johin was in a summiting position. He had never done that even to Yokonewski. Jack was still biting his ear but stopped after awhile. Jack got up and stood right next to Johin who didn’t even move. Then Jack walked off and Johin got up. Yokonewski’s mouth was still open. Before he knew it, Jack opened the door by himself and went inside the house.
girdragon
06-19-2007, 02:41 PM
Chapter Three: The Hunt
A few months has gone by ever since Yokonewski got Jack. Jack has surpassed Johin in many ways. He can now run, fight and hunt better then Johin. Jack is now about 1 years old. He went outside like he normally did everyday but this day was different. Jack could hear a dog backing. He ran to the dog that was barking. It was a Yorkshire Terrier. “Hey why are you barking?” Jack asked as he went over to the dog in the window. “My family and I just came back from vacation and I wanted to say hi to the new dog” The Yorkshire said to Jack and he smiled. “My name is Jack” He said to the other dog. “Copper, that’s my name” The Terrier answered.
“Hey Copper, how long have you been in this town?” Jack asked Copper. “I think only about 2 years. I’m only 2 years old” Copper said. Jack heard the door open and a human guy came out. The person looked at Jack. “Hey there, you must be Yokonewski’s new dog” The person came over to Jack and put his hand out. Jack looked at the hand not knowing what to do. Jack then heard a whistle from Yokonewski. “See you later Copper!” Jack said to Copper as he ran to his owner. “That’s a fast dog” Copper’s owner said to himself.
Jack ran over to Yokonewski and sat down right next to Johin. “Are you guys ready to go for a hunt?” Yokonewski asked the dogs. Jack jumped in the air and started to back. Yokonewski lead the dogs into the forest.
After awhile they found a deer. Johin licked his lips ready to run to it. Jack looked at the deer and did the same. “Go!” Yokonewski said to the dogs. Johin ran fast after the deer but Jack ran faster. The deer saw them and it ran fast. Johin got tired and stopped to catch his breath. But Jack kept on running. He ran for a long time and the deer got tired. Jack ran up to the deer and went to it’s throat. The deer fell down making noses at Jack and trying to get him off. The deer then got up and rammed his head into a tree with Jack still on him. Jack jumped off then went for it’s eye. The deer screamed and fell down once more. Jack then went to it’s throat again and bit it hard. The deer died in a seconds.
Yokonewski and Johin ran over to Jack. Yokonewski’s eyes opened wide. He saw that the deer was a full grown buck. It was even hard for Johin to take down a buck let along a full grown one. Yokonewski kneeled down and looked at the buck. He pet Jack on the head. “Good boy” He said to Jack.
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