hero arise

[deto]

awaken to voices from afar
hither and thither noises from the war
rise you shalt, to a bloody dawn
today a new hero will spawn

sheathe your sword, mount your horse
tonight you'll know no remorse
ride over plains so far and white
disappear into the twilight of the night

come haste, come haste, across the waste
bring sword, bring peace and fate!

ride thru darkness towards the light
ever since longing for this fight
show no fear now, clean the land
spare none, cut down the evil hand

rivers flowing red thru the valley of myst
you the hero, you brought the twist
hear them chanting your name as you go
leaving footprints in the darkened snow

come haste, come haste, across the waste
bring sword, bring peace and fate!

[Decado]

That was great.

idk y I'm reading your poems tonite. The first line took me as I floated my mouse over the thread.. and the rest just builds on it really well. The non-italised last line especially (5th stanza)

sheat your sword
Idk if you did it on purpose, since you did leave through as "thru" but sheat is "sheathe"

[deto]

yeh that why i try to cover my horrible ingliszh skeelz :redbiggri also i think "thru" gives it more speed, makes it faster and uhm... nicer to read

[Isis]

Awesome poem Di ^^

Actually, this poem has more shakesperean language then normal language so through was spelt thru back then. Although sheathe is the same as it is now :P Who cares if your english is limited or whatever, you write brilliant poetry :)

[Baby-Pie]

neat...even though im not into this stuff..its hopeful which is nice