Sleazy Freezing and Helpless Moves

[Artemis]

Sleazy Freezing and Helpless Moves
By Nick L.
Number #9, Volume 3

When I dance,
I dance to be set free
That when birds sing;
My feet tap towards the rhythm

Give me a minute,
Let me draw out my trumpet,
And my soul;
Then we'll start to the sweeping motions

You can go a one, two
Then I'll follow with the three and four;
We'll end with the penta,
And then we'll be out of the gates

Grace with the beat,
Though we beat to the grace;
Then the woman will ask,
And I will cry;

Then we can be free.

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Not sure, but I felt like writing this poem.
So I wrote it in this text box.

Comments and whatnot are asked for.

[Isis]

Love the poem Nick ^^ The imagery is quite simple so its great :)

[Baby-Pie]

nyyaaa i feel like dancing now...awesome Nick..its great

[Yamamoto]

what's a penta?

Awesome though. Inspiring, new ideas for poems :)

[Artemis]

This was dying man. Then you come out of no where and breath some crappy life into it. :<

Penta?
It isn't a real word. In fact.

But 'penta' is generally used to refer to things of five.

So, what I did was use 'penta' to replace 'five'.
It seemed more fitting. :)

[Yamamoto]

Ah I see now, thanks :)

But i love how it's something new to the poetry I'm used to ^_^

(sorry for bringing it to life..>_>)