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5th of April
09-04-2007, 11:15 AM
Leave the door unlocked
The night wind will close it for you
Turn now and go
Your steps will echo
But not for long
Not for long
Isis
09-04-2007, 01:34 PM
Short and sweet, and straight to the point. Its good.
MasterWordSmith
09-05-2007, 09:33 AM
Agreed, not too much CandC to give here, considering the language is nice and concice, leaving no room for our imaginations to really run wild, but leaving us with a nice image. =)
Lex
09-05-2007, 10:03 AM
Nice! Love the short ones, this is really good!
Murder1
09-05-2007, 03:26 PM
Whoa, who need a thousand word to paint a picture, You just done it in 27. *Murder 1 stands and claps*:biggthump