One more time to fly

[Seff vi Britannia]

(seffs third evar poem!)

This is quite fun actually.

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crouching behind the wall,
sandbags and dirt
shield me from hurt,
I'll give it all,
never look back,
one more time to fly,

another chance to die.

A crack in the air,
violent hiss, flying silver
unlucky for him - it's over.
I stand, and my weapon i bear
Rushing forward, breaking formation
one more time to fly,

another chance to die.

A last stand is only last,
when you're outnumbered,
outgunned, and they're coming fast.
We are ten, and they are hundred
They are human, we do not fear
one more time to fly,

another chance to die.

My feet scatter the dust,
on the war-scarred earth
But continue i must
War, Ha!, such mirth!
And then, a flash, a crack.
one more time to fly,

another chance to d-

[Isis]

O: This one was even better.

cover me from hurt,
Somehow it doesn't fit in too well within the stanza. It might just be me though.

I loved how you ended the poem too ^^ Keep writing, you!

[Jaran]

cover me from hurt

'Shield me from hurt' would have been a better word choice for that line.

[Seff vi Britannia]

Thanks for the suggestion, changed it. :D

[Artemis]

Smexy ending, Sam.

You're going really well.
I didn't even fully read the thing and I'm impressed.

Good practice, makes a better man and fearful soul. :)

[Baby-Pie]

omg it dint finish...wat happn???? >.>....leaves so many questions..awesome work sam..