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Seff vi Britannia
09-08-2007, 11:43 PM
The Calm before the Storm


Discipline binds me
as we stand in line,
playing the Ace,
passing time
for our turn comes soon
that we may dine,

feast upon blood,
the innards of the snake,
attack them with wrath,
smite them with hate
for the blood they took.
Payback.

Stand by me, my friends,
STAND READY!
The sergeant's shrill cry
enters my ears and
joviality dies.
It is time.

A second i take,
as the whistle is blown
to gather the nerves
in the mind that i roam,
then i leapt, rushing forwards
into the path of crimson water.








~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


The Animal I Become.



The sparrow passes overhead,
it's call the only cry in the night,
Black. An omen, says Williams.
Swiftly rebuked, he backs down;
"He's thinking of a raven"
a voice behind me chirps.
Too loud.

Discipline is lost,
my men break formation, scattering
leaping into the undergrowth
under the withering hail of file
and the shouts of foreign voices
yet i keep my position, perfectly still,
A viper poised to strike.

Heavy boots clank into earth by my side,
I spin, drawing my sidearm,
Blood showering over me
Then the cries are louder, closer, more
and in my mind a cloud of doubt forms
fear and panic, becoming strife,
abducting my sanity...

I snap forwards, breaking a jaw,
twisting violently as the silver
shards of metal pound into my chest;
and i persist in my assault,
Mindless and berserk,
the pain drowning me, overwhelming me,
Like the animal i have become.

Baby-Pie
09-09-2007, 02:24 AM
that we may dine,
feast upon blood,
the innards of the snake,
attack them with wrath,
smite them with hate
for the blood they took.
Payback.

I snap forwards, breaking a jaw,
twisting violently as the silver
shards of metal pound into my chest;
and i persist in my assault,
Mindless and berserk,
the pain drowning me, overwhelming me,
Like the animal i have become.


From the 1st one i love this para...its the vibe it gives off...

and the 2nd one ...wow...thats awesome...gave me chills...*hugs*

Isis
09-09-2007, 03:16 AM
Wow, dude your poems are awesome! You seem to like the war theme a lot. Despite that, I get a strong image from both poems. Out of all the ones you've done, the Animal I Have Become one is my favourite.

Seff vi Britannia
09-09-2007, 10:49 AM
Lol, find war easiest to write about. Probably because i haven't actually been there. Which gives me another idea...