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Seff vi Britannia
09-10-2007, 09:57 PM
Morituri victis honourem

Returning a Hero, songs and stories,
writing my name in clouded words
and showering me with cryptic praise.
the medals on my chest gleam in the sun,
As my star-dazzled eyes gaze at the dawn,
Respice post te! Hominem te esse memento!

Envy and Jealousy gaurd my rear,
With acceptable practice at my flanks,
But not I would let such victory,
Drive away the needless paranoia.
For no woman could i open my sheets,
A fronte praecipitium a tergo lupi.

Even in the slipstream of such paradise,
Fought for with blood and sweat,
Won in a cloud of steel and blackened ashes.
Even i have left the battle fought,
I cannot prise open my golden breastplate,
Memento mori.


In trust stands a lost ideal,
Save in one place, perhaps, where
it resides in a fleeting moment, when
you place your life in the hands of another.
Nay, it is not the bed, nor the market.
Pro fides instituo in pugna.


Translations: (sorry if they are off slightly)
Morituri victis honourem
We who will die have honour
Respice post te! Hominem te esse memento!
look to your back! remember you are but a man!
A fronte praecipitium a tergo lupi.
(non literal) between a rock and a wolf
Memento mori.
remember you can die
Pro fides instituo in pugna.
It resides in battle.

Isis
09-10-2007, 10:20 PM
Awesomeness, at least this one portrays a more human feel rather then the harshness of war. Liked it ^^

You spelt guard wrong :P

Yamamoto
09-10-2007, 11:38 PM
Is that latin?

i like the feel created by them words, like it's exotic kind of..

You really have a thing for war :p

Seff vi Britannia
09-11-2007, 07:56 AM
Aye, it's latin. :)

(i put the translations at the bottom ^__^)
All my poems are about war because i find it very easy to write about - so you can tell i've never been there. My poems are all totally innacurate, not fully showing the harshness of war, always portraying glory and a heroic death. Of course, it's nothing like that, something which i failed to have got across ¬__¬

I'm thinking the title of my first poetry volume should be "mostly about war" xD

Isis
09-11-2007, 09:11 AM
Noooo, dont have good poems and then have the set title as "mostly about war". Think of something awesome!

Yamamoto
09-11-2007, 09:17 AM
Lol..if anything, translate ti to some other language to make it sound better..

like this song I heard in Spanish but was all about candy :p