Fishing.

[Seff vi Britannia]

Thoughts are like Fish,
Ripples on the surface
Of the great blue void
That is my expansive mind.

The harder i pull them,
the harder they swim away.
And when i nearly have them,
The line will break.

There are many kinds of fish
That swim around in my lake.
There are big fish, crabs
Little fish and monster sharks.

As an amateur i consider
Any one to be a great catch.
But the bigger the better,
I don't want to be thinking small

All my life.

[Pyramus]

Inspired! Nice poem! :p

[Isis]

Awesome imagery, Seff ^__^ One which I never really looked into perspective. Well done :)

[Seff vi Britannia]

Thanks guys. :3

[Yamamoto]

Wow, such simple imagery/comparison, and so effective...


I feel like swimming now for some reason =/

[Seff vi Britannia]

./subliminal messaging >___>


Swim for me, kenny. :D

Thanks for your comment. :3