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Isis
09-13-2007, 04:41 PM
Two pairs of eyes stay locked to one another
As two people enter a world of their own
The spanish guitar strums with the strings of the heart
As the crowded room watches in awe

The beat takes a hold of the body
As it starts to sway in euphoria
With quick and sharp technique
It captures the soul and imagination

Hands touch as hips sway
Creating almost guilty pleasure
As they lose track of time
Lost under passion and moonlight

Spinning around to the sound of drums
Scorching fire in their souls
As bodies flow with one another
Desire runs wild

And then the music stops
Leaving two people breathless
With one more move, they bow freely
As applause drowns out the beating of their hearts

Lenne
09-15-2007, 01:56 AM
great imagery in this, i can imagine the dance floor and the music in my mind.
great write!

keep it up

Yamamoto
09-15-2007, 11:02 AM
Wow yeah...same here

I actually was imagining a dance (although there is a whole other connotation to this and i was like "Is this what you meant? :o")

For the record, I like the dance image better :p

Isis
09-15-2007, 03:29 PM
It was more on the dance, when I was writing this, I was thinking about Salsa and South American dances. Dance full of passion, right?