Luso Clemens
10-19-2005, 10:44 PM
Yes, yes, I know this doesn't have anything to do with Bleach or Naruto... but bare with me, I mean.. hey, their's gotta be some kind of variety on here, eh?
By the way, no offence ment towards the person I posted about on the Naruto Vs. Bleach fanfic thing
Anyhow... this may turn out a bit screwy, I can never get the MSword to paste right... but anyhow again, here it is, I don't think I've put a title on it yet... if you do, it sorta adds some taboo to it in my case... makes me not want to work on it anymore
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“Sammy, Sammy!”
(((My name is Samuel Ford, I’m twelve years old and I have just fallen out of bed.)))
“Mum?” Samuel got up off of the cold floor, and rubbed the left side of his head, he could feel a lump there
“Mum, what’s wrong?” he asked her
His mother had just run into the room, startling him awake
“It’s your father,” she told him “he’s...” she trailed off, her face twisted up in sorrow and she began to sob
“Mum, what is it?” Samuel’s throat started to burn, he didn’t like this, seeing his mother cry, it was like a sickness that spread quickly from one person to another, tears formed in his eyes
“What is it, what happened to dad?” his eyes were wide and his face a chalky white
“He’s dead, Sammy!” With those words, it was as if his mother’s heart had burst, hands over her face, she dropped down on her knees and began to wail, Samuel stood there, stunned by what his mother had just told him, then, in a hoarse whisper he asked
“How… how did it happen, Mum?”
“He was killed, while in the service of The Cause”
Samuel looked up from his mother to his bedroom doorway, a tall muscular man with glowing blue eyes and a strange uniform on was standing there, his eyes flickered for a moment, as if he were blinking
Samuel looked back down at his mother and then back at the man again
“Who are you?” he asked, “What do you mean he died in the service, he wasn’t even in the army!”
The man looked at Samuel’s mother, “You haven’t told him yet, Judy?” he asked her
“I couldn’t, Brim, I just couldn’t”
She looked horrible, her eyes were raw and rimmed with red, Samuel could tell his mother was somewhat frightened of this man
“Told me what?” he asked
“Told you about your father, Samuel, about what he was and what he did for a living” Brim replied
“He was a doctor, I know already!” Samuel shouted, he was upset about his father, and
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now seeing this man show up out of no where and start accusing his mother of not telling Samuel anything about his father made him feel even more upset.
Brim furrowed his brow “A doctor?” he asked “Judy, you told your son his father was a doctor?”
Brim walked toward Samuel and his mother, thinking he was going to try and hurt her, Samuel walked in front of his mother, stuck out his arms as if to block the man, and said “Don’t hurt my mother, she didn’t do anything to you!”
Brim’s eyes glowed brighter in surprise “I wasn’t going to hurt her, boy” he touched his hand to Samuel’s forehead, images flashed into Samuel’s head, he drew back from Brim and gasped “What did you just do to me?!”
His voice squeaked and then deepened, he felt strange, and when he looked down at the floor it seemed to be getting further away
He was scared, he wanted his mother to hold him and tell him everything was going to be alright, he turned to his mother and then saw the look on her face, her eyes were wide and her mouth was wide, shaped like an ‘O’, tears were sliding down her cheeks
“Mum?” he grabbed his throat, shocked by the sound of his voice, it sounded smooth, older, he ran to his closet, opened it up, and looked in the mirror and almost fainted from what he saw, his hair had grown out, and his face had gotten older looking, he looked at his clothes, they were too small for his body, sticking to him and cutting into his skin, his feet had gone from an eight and a half to a size eleven, the toe end was ripped open and his feet were sticking halfway out of his shoes…
(((My name is Samuel Ford; I have just gone from a short twelve year old kid to a tall twenty-five year old man in less then two minutes)))
“W-what did you do to me?” he stammered, his hands felt up and down his face, “What’s going on…?” he turned to Brim, “How did this happen…why…?”
“I had to” he said, “When your father died someone had to take his place, and seeing as you were his son, well…” he put up his arms “It only seemed right to pass his legacy on to his own child.” Brim could see Samuel was still confused, “Samuel, your father was a great man,” he told him “he would have wanted you to follow in his footsteps”
Samuel felt like he was going to go crazy, all this talk, what was going on?
“But what did he DO?!” Samuel asked “and what makes you think I even WANT this?”
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His confusion soon turned to anger, how could this be happening?
If his father wasn’t a doctor, then just what was he?
How come his mother had been feeding him lies about his father all this time?
His father would always come home at least two or three times a week, sometimes bringing him and his mother a gift and then rushing off again, he would never talk about his work, and whenever he asked his mother about what his father did, she would always tell him that his father was a doctor
While all this was going on Judy, Samuel’s mother, was watching, all of her tears cried, she finely spoke up, “Your father,” she said, slowly rising from the floor, surprising both Samuel and Brim, “wasn’t a doctor, Sammy, I know that you’re angry at me for lying to you” she hung her head, looking down at the floor “and I’m sorry for not telling you the truth”
“Mum, why did you lie?” Samuel bunched up his fists in frustration, “What was so important and such a secret that you felt you had to lie to me all the time?”
His mother looked up at him, “I couldn’t tell you, because…” she frowned, Brim stood there, looking at them both, waiting for Judy to tell her son, but she said nothing of Samuel’s father, what she said was “Sammy, you…” she looked him over “You should go change your clothes… the ones you’re wearing,” she chuckled “you seem to have outgrown them”
“Mum…” Samuel started to say something else but Brim interrupted him before he could finish talking, Brim could tell she was trying to keep it so she didn’t have to say anything about it “Way to change the subject, Judy” he crossed his arms “One of us is going to have to tell him, and I would prefer you do it.”
Judy looked at Brim, she looked angry, the nerve of him, she was trying to get her son’s mind on something else but he… Brim had brought it up again “I know what you’re thinking, Judy, but it’s not going to work, he just grew another two feet for God sake!” Brim pointed his finger at her “And if you think he’s not going to notice then he’s as dense as you are, now tell him”
She waved her arms into the air “Fine… you want me to tell him?” she walked up to Brim, got right in his face, and shouted “I’ll tell him!” she turned around to face Samuel, “You want to know about your father?” she said, the look on her face startled Samuel, “Your father was some sort of agent, a secret agent I suppose you would say…” she bit her lip “So secret he couldn’t even spend much time with his family, it sickens me…
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something like this happening…” she paused, and motioned for Brim and Samuel “Come… I’ll tell you more in the living room…but first, Brim, my son needs to change his clothes. Samuel, in my bedroom I have some of your father’s old clothes hanging in the closet. Go in and put something else on”
By the way, no offence ment towards the person I posted about on the Naruto Vs. Bleach fanfic thing
Anyhow... this may turn out a bit screwy, I can never get the MSword to paste right... but anyhow again, here it is, I don't think I've put a title on it yet... if you do, it sorta adds some taboo to it in my case... makes me not want to work on it anymore
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Page 1
< ((Beginning)) >
“Sammy, Sammy!”
(((My name is Samuel Ford, I’m twelve years old and I have just fallen out of bed.)))
“Mum?” Samuel got up off of the cold floor, and rubbed the left side of his head, he could feel a lump there
“Mum, what’s wrong?” he asked her
His mother had just run into the room, startling him awake
“It’s your father,” she told him “he’s...” she trailed off, her face twisted up in sorrow and she began to sob
“Mum, what is it?” Samuel’s throat started to burn, he didn’t like this, seeing his mother cry, it was like a sickness that spread quickly from one person to another, tears formed in his eyes
“What is it, what happened to dad?” his eyes were wide and his face a chalky white
“He’s dead, Sammy!” With those words, it was as if his mother’s heart had burst, hands over her face, she dropped down on her knees and began to wail, Samuel stood there, stunned by what his mother had just told him, then, in a hoarse whisper he asked
“How… how did it happen, Mum?”
“He was killed, while in the service of The Cause”
Samuel looked up from his mother to his bedroom doorway, a tall muscular man with glowing blue eyes and a strange uniform on was standing there, his eyes flickered for a moment, as if he were blinking
Samuel looked back down at his mother and then back at the man again
“Who are you?” he asked, “What do you mean he died in the service, he wasn’t even in the army!”
The man looked at Samuel’s mother, “You haven’t told him yet, Judy?” he asked her
“I couldn’t, Brim, I just couldn’t”
She looked horrible, her eyes were raw and rimmed with red, Samuel could tell his mother was somewhat frightened of this man
“Told me what?” he asked
“Told you about your father, Samuel, about what he was and what he did for a living” Brim replied
“He was a doctor, I know already!” Samuel shouted, he was upset about his father, and
Page 2
< ((Beginning)) >
now seeing this man show up out of no where and start accusing his mother of not telling Samuel anything about his father made him feel even more upset.
Brim furrowed his brow “A doctor?” he asked “Judy, you told your son his father was a doctor?”
Brim walked toward Samuel and his mother, thinking he was going to try and hurt her, Samuel walked in front of his mother, stuck out his arms as if to block the man, and said “Don’t hurt my mother, she didn’t do anything to you!”
Brim’s eyes glowed brighter in surprise “I wasn’t going to hurt her, boy” he touched his hand to Samuel’s forehead, images flashed into Samuel’s head, he drew back from Brim and gasped “What did you just do to me?!”
His voice squeaked and then deepened, he felt strange, and when he looked down at the floor it seemed to be getting further away
He was scared, he wanted his mother to hold him and tell him everything was going to be alright, he turned to his mother and then saw the look on her face, her eyes were wide and her mouth was wide, shaped like an ‘O’, tears were sliding down her cheeks
“Mum?” he grabbed his throat, shocked by the sound of his voice, it sounded smooth, older, he ran to his closet, opened it up, and looked in the mirror and almost fainted from what he saw, his hair had grown out, and his face had gotten older looking, he looked at his clothes, they were too small for his body, sticking to him and cutting into his skin, his feet had gone from an eight and a half to a size eleven, the toe end was ripped open and his feet were sticking halfway out of his shoes…
(((My name is Samuel Ford; I have just gone from a short twelve year old kid to a tall twenty-five year old man in less then two minutes)))
“W-what did you do to me?” he stammered, his hands felt up and down his face, “What’s going on…?” he turned to Brim, “How did this happen…why…?”
“I had to” he said, “When your father died someone had to take his place, and seeing as you were his son, well…” he put up his arms “It only seemed right to pass his legacy on to his own child.” Brim could see Samuel was still confused, “Samuel, your father was a great man,” he told him “he would have wanted you to follow in his footsteps”
Samuel felt like he was going to go crazy, all this talk, what was going on?
“But what did he DO?!” Samuel asked “and what makes you think I even WANT this?”
Page 3
< ((Beginning)) >
His confusion soon turned to anger, how could this be happening?
If his father wasn’t a doctor, then just what was he?
How come his mother had been feeding him lies about his father all this time?
His father would always come home at least two or three times a week, sometimes bringing him and his mother a gift and then rushing off again, he would never talk about his work, and whenever he asked his mother about what his father did, she would always tell him that his father was a doctor
While all this was going on Judy, Samuel’s mother, was watching, all of her tears cried, she finely spoke up, “Your father,” she said, slowly rising from the floor, surprising both Samuel and Brim, “wasn’t a doctor, Sammy, I know that you’re angry at me for lying to you” she hung her head, looking down at the floor “and I’m sorry for not telling you the truth”
“Mum, why did you lie?” Samuel bunched up his fists in frustration, “What was so important and such a secret that you felt you had to lie to me all the time?”
His mother looked up at him, “I couldn’t tell you, because…” she frowned, Brim stood there, looking at them both, waiting for Judy to tell her son, but she said nothing of Samuel’s father, what she said was “Sammy, you…” she looked him over “You should go change your clothes… the ones you’re wearing,” she chuckled “you seem to have outgrown them”
“Mum…” Samuel started to say something else but Brim interrupted him before he could finish talking, Brim could tell she was trying to keep it so she didn’t have to say anything about it “Way to change the subject, Judy” he crossed his arms “One of us is going to have to tell him, and I would prefer you do it.”
Judy looked at Brim, she looked angry, the nerve of him, she was trying to get her son’s mind on something else but he… Brim had brought it up again “I know what you’re thinking, Judy, but it’s not going to work, he just grew another two feet for God sake!” Brim pointed his finger at her “And if you think he’s not going to notice then he’s as dense as you are, now tell him”
She waved her arms into the air “Fine… you want me to tell him?” she walked up to Brim, got right in his face, and shouted “I’ll tell him!” she turned around to face Samuel, “You want to know about your father?” she said, the look on her face startled Samuel, “Your father was some sort of agent, a secret agent I suppose you would say…” she bit her lip “So secret he couldn’t even spend much time with his family, it sickens me…
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something like this happening…” she paused, and motioned for Brim and Samuel “Come… I’ll tell you more in the living room…but first, Brim, my son needs to change his clothes. Samuel, in my bedroom I have some of your father’s old clothes hanging in the closet. Go in and put something else on”