Little Warning Lights

[Isis]

Passing through corridors
Sheer ignorance is the key

Out of the two of us
Who will be first, to catch sight
Of lingering glances
Quickly averted in the light

Sheltered thoughts
You've all but remembered
Just moving on with life..

Scars left opened
But you don't seem to mind
Let bygones be bygones
The discomfort seems to pass

So like you I ignore
The little warning lights
Emitting from the heart..

Forget about it.

[Murder1]

Very heart felt, I liked it.

[Icestorm]

I liked it.. especially the 2nd stanza.. but the only thing is the end line is a bit hmm.. awkward? perhaps break it up.. and end it with the forget about line.. that way it finalizes it and leaves the lasting impression.

[Isis]

Thanks for the comment Tom :) I'll revise the last line.