I'm..

[Isis]

Waiting..
As tears form behind strong eyes
Slowly lost dreams
Hidden feelings
Fall out effortlessly

I could cry out
But what good will it do now
Tears don't seem to stop
Even as hours and days go past

Fading..
As the heart soon follows tears
Numb with bitterness
For uncaught joy
Drawing out slowly

I could speak out
If not for silent whispers
My voice has long gone
Even as hours and days go past

Disappearing..
As the soul breaks down its defences
Crumbling to a million pieces
Caught by the wind
Drifting off to ethereal places

I could reach out
And touch you once more
But the mind will not forget
Even as hours and days go past

Lost.

[Icestorm]

Very well done.. The words used to convey the descriptions in the stanza's is very dense and helps to create the image really well.. The use of one word at the end is good.

[deto]

heart wretching. but very well done, i like the flow in it. keep up the good work shaz :)

[Isis]

Thanks for the comments guys :)