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Nesquik
09-28-2007, 04:37 AM
The good days are beginning,
I have a smile on my face everyday;
The smile you give me,
Let’s spend together a whole day,
Just the two of us!

Only us;
Hugging, kissing,
So perfectly together,
I’ll help you forever.

You’re my heaven,
It’s just happiness inside me;
Our days shall never be dark,
For our love is there.

Just the two of us together.


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It was supposed to be a song, and it turned into that.
It's about VM and me.
Though i kinda went out of how things are XD

Alerane
09-28-2007, 04:38 AM
its nice, I like it dani ^^

Nesquik
09-28-2007, 04:39 AM
Thankies Cakey =3

Edgey
09-28-2007, 10:49 PM
/me gives poem the uber kiss of awesomeness
/me also gives dani the uber kiss of awesomeness

That is so cool and sweet! X3 +repsexlove
EDIT: Screw you "Must spread more reputation" message! :(

Nesquik
09-28-2007, 10:50 PM
You called me dani! yayness! =3
The poem kinda went out though...

Edgey
09-28-2007, 10:56 PM
I'm no good at poetry so I don't know about it"going out" I'm afraid, sorry for not being a good critique :<

And you can call me Luke :D

Neko Rae
09-28-2007, 10:57 PM
So cute! You're so good at writing these kind of things

Midare
09-30-2007, 03:12 AM
That's very nice Stars, really.... even when I'm not the romantic type XD

Nesquik
09-30-2007, 03:14 AM
Luke: "Going out" meant that it went out of our relationship XD
Hira: Thankies :3
Mida: Yay! Thankies!

Mighty Aramir
10-09-2007, 02:18 AM
Muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuy bien padawan!!
it's great, you have improved a lot! I'm very very proud! -huggles-

Nesquik
10-09-2007, 02:20 AM
Graaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaacias sensei ^^
*huggles back*

warp:routine
10-09-2007, 02:23 AM
too cute... makes me jealous >.<

lol *hugs the dani*