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Askand
09-28-2007, 06:37 AM
It's been a while since I had posted something. Based on a chapter from the anime series D.Gray Man I wrote it soon after I saw this chapter. I hope you like it and comments as always welcome. Thank you in advance for the time you dedicate to read this.

*Bows Respectfully*
Askand

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Endless Lullaby

At night darkness is at his high
Loneliness just a thought
That a breeze will swing around
At a corner of the Universe
It’s us holding each other
Waiting for the last breath to be exhale
To cease our existence together

Grant me my wish Oh my sweetest
Little doll
Grant me one last glimpse of Heaven on Earth
A last Lullaby I request from your lips
A song to ease the pain
To make easy my leave of this place

I shall grant you your wish
Oh my eternal child
My full of life young one
My ever lasting Man
A lullaby that will follow you
Forever and ever
Even on the darkness
An Endless lullaby
The will shine your path forever

Baby-Pie
09-28-2007, 07:01 AM
zomg askand!!!!! thats amazing...its deep and sad..breaks my heart but in a way..if u try to describe it in any other way it just wont be right...*hugs*

Askand
09-28-2007, 07:26 AM
I guess some sadness is part of me. Thanks for the comment Ririn *hugs back and grins*

Alerane
09-28-2007, 04:13 PM
That's beautifully done Askand, lovely poem ^^

SoundWave
09-28-2007, 04:45 PM
Even though some words are scrambled a little here and there, it still gets the message through..

very nicely done.. ^^