Desperation

[Murder1]

I cannot seem to focus, I cannot concentrate.
My mind seems to jump to all the things I hate.
I try to hide those feelings, it's harder everyday.
I'd like to figure out how to stop feeling this way.
Is there any answer, am I trying to hold sand.
It's starting to become more than I can stand.
Why am I like this, can anyone relate.
Please tell me what to do, before it's

[Toasty]

Two things I loved about this:

1. "am I trying to hold sand." Wonderful visual. I loved it.

2. "Please tell me what to do, before it's" ------------ well, I love how it was left blank at the end. You let us feel in the rest, and at the perfect spot as well. Great ending. Keep it up.

[Daft Punk]

You have one kinda rough line in there,

I try to hide those feelings, it's harder everyday.
I'd like to figure out how to stop feeling this way.

You used too many words in the second line there, you need to find a way to cut one off. It kinda messes up the flow, but I like it overall.