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Cursive
03-15-2008, 03:46 AM
of myself.
First time?
1
I
am an empty shell,
impermeable
to the bittersweet
happiness in which I am submerged.
2
Constantly, Disappointment struggles
for release from its captivity.
So skilled at escape
is my life partner.
Interesting concept, and the imagery is strong. I like how its captured, but how it is also able to escape.
Is this your first poem?
Cursive
03-15-2008, 04:49 PM
Yes, it is/they are. They're not meant to be connected in any way.
I don't write often at all, because when I write it's to express myself, and what's to express when I'm grabbing at things in myself that may not even be there? I let them surface of their own accord, so you may not be seeing a whole lot from me around here, or anything very long for that matter, I'd think.
Thanks for the comments. :)
Oh, my bad.
Hehe, well if it allows you to express yourself, as little or as much times in this section, then so be it. Thanks for sharing though :)
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