Nothing

[Aina1]

here's a poem i wrote when i was bored and alone.

Alone.
Peace.
Quiet.
Silence.

Loneliness is something that is alone.
There is no one.
Nothing makes a sound.
Not even a single tone.

Peace is something that is good.
A place where nothing is wrong.
Everthing's right.
Or does it seem that way?

Quiet, is, and always be,
Nothing. No one.
Just you, yourself,
And no "I".

Silence is good.
Or do you think that?
Is it nothing but a lie,
That you tell yourself is true?

I hate emptiness.
For it is what I am.
Nothing but a beautiful shell,
And a hurtful quiet.

A tear quietly falls
Inside my heart.
I've done my part.
So now, lay and rest.
In a peaceful quiet,
Silent life.
Loneliness won't exist,
Only silence.

When you awake,
Silence.

When you leave,
Loneliness.

When you go without me,
Pain.

So don't just go
And leave me with
Nothing.

so whaddya think? :babies:

[Joe Black]

I love how this poem characterizes how nothing can cause the greatest of our pains.
I'll look forward to reading more of you!

[Aina1]

thank you i have another one im gonna ost!

[zen]

That was a great poem, show deep solitude.