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Club Bleach Poem of the Week #14
THEME: Touch
Rules:
1. No plagiarism - It has to be your own work.
2. There is no specified length.
3. The poem can be in any style or form you want.
4. You are allowed to edit your entry as long as it is before the time limit ends.
- Last day for entries is Friday, March 21st, 2008 @ 11:59:59 PM CST
- No Reserving.
- Please no posts other than entries (Means no comments)
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Blind
Touch and feel,
The surface under your fingers.
A thousand experiences await you,
All you need to do is run into them.
A dark blank slate is all you see,
Eyes filmed over with white.
Fingers become eyes,
Touch becomes sight.
ikkaku's girl
03-18-2008, 07:53 AM
Waking up
The stars dance in the sky
Hypnotizing me with the moon’s unheard song.
Unable to succumb to sleep,
I desperately search my mind
For sweet, safe, serenity.
Your hand
Gently glides atop my skin
Like a paint brush to a masterpiece,
Your palm
Finally coming to rest
On my hand,
Our fingers dance
Rejoicing in the union.
Your scruffy beard tickles
My bare shoulder,
As your kiss
Resonates through out me,
Your warm breath the catalyst,
Until it is released
As a gentle sigh from my lips.
The realm of impossibility
Engulfs me completely
And I am safe in my own imagination,
As you are by my side.
Light creeps into my eyes
As my ears echo with
Blaring ringing of responsibilities.
The realization of reality
Will soon set in
When I sit up in consciousness.
You are not here;
You never were,
You never will be.
But the blankets are warm,
And I return to slumber,
Just to feel you next to me again.
Icestorm
03-18-2008, 01:16 PM
Timely Beauty
Conscious thought,
Brought forth into
A language, without speaking.
Words were never enough
To quell my thoughts and
Hold my blazing emotions.
Not a sin, but beauty,
Held in motion for seconds
To convey what langauge cannot.
Its always that my words,
Deceive my true thoughts
In the moment of my embrace.
And it always stands,
That I can never say
What is felt in my words
But you never get me wrong
When you feel the warmth,
Of my hand,
Grasping yours.
His Touch
Intangible senses,
Grasping confusion
With outstretched hands
Catching glimmers of uncertainty
As the heart wrenches in pain.
Escape into dreams
That play with true emotion
Kept secret without voice
Struggling to comprehend
The desire so quietly masked
Scream, as shadows overcome
With unmistakeable fear
Choking you slowly
As arms engulf you
whispering sweet nothings
Open your eyes, to stare
into the eyes of a lover
Holding you
It is all it takes..
For nightmares to disappear
His touch.
Skin wrapped around evil
laced with greed&lust
I told you no
why does your hand and still advance?
my innocent skin fouled
spoiled
ruined, I will never have that smooth luxurious skin again
Now and forever tainted with your vileness
At night I feel my skin crawl
In remembrance of your
Touch
Katen Kyoukotsu
03-20-2008, 08:58 AM
A palm on laminated wood
Cool to the touch
Smooth as if to hide
The minute tiny stains
And such
Warm steel all the same
So normal we are one
But when he lies down
I lose his name
It feels completely new
Every single time
And that’s because it is
Without a rhyme
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