Without Passion, Without Drive

[Montrell274]

Without that passion, without that focus
Life will be bullshit, trust, I know this
This is the reflection of life without that drive
Being at the point where one can’t enjoy the ride

The point of numbness is a point of no emotion
Where life is viewed empty, like the ocean
Goin through the day, just coastin
not even boastin, things just in slow motion
Without the passion to go, all one can do is stop
Hitting rock bottom instead of going to the top

So what is the decision, what is the solution
To become a better person, a true evolution
Enough of letting life’s hardships break you
Instead, let those hardships make you
Motivation cannot come from others but it can come from self
The motivation must be genuine, true, and heartfelt
Some people did this in 2 weeks when it took others 5
Think of your life..without passion…without drive.

Alt Link (http://losevolution.com/poetry/without-passionwithout-drive/)

[vidDa]

this is a very strong poem. You speak the truth, our passion is our drive, to struggle into perfection of things we like to do, and without it you are just an empty shell with no constant goal in front of himself.
Very good, will be looking forward for more from you.

[zen]

It's good, the rhymes weaved together easily I do feel a few were forced, but still good.

[Ai]

A very nice flow you've set up in this piece..It's not the usual flow which you see in this sort of piece however I enjoy your sort of flow.

Its a nice theme and I think you've done a wonderful thing with it..Great job and looking forward to seeing your next piece that you grace us with.

[Sin]

Very inspiring and motivating, I really like this piece.

[Montrell274]

thx