Strawberry Fields

[Icestorm]

Black forest, white leaves.
Surrounded I stray
Through the nothingness
In light of the winters day.


A wind passes through,
Revealing you.
A colour in the grey,
Beauty words could never say.

Hands touch in darkness,
Words pass in whisper
Trailing fingers pass through,
Silken hair.

Looking into shining eyes
Stars glow for you,
Passing messages to the soul,
That leaves a feeling of something true.

As quick as its there,
Your gone.
Fingers still feel your touch,
And lips your embrace.

Hands now cold,
Reach out to feel nothing.
Once again the forest is grey,
You never stay.

But In my pocket reveals
To my surprise,
A heart shaped strawberry,
In the colour

Of sunrise.



Dedicated to my e-wifey.

[zen]

that was awesome I'm glad to be the first to respond on it, it's great and lovely, it fits shaberry very well. and it's sweet.

[shaberry]

*BLUSH* Omg...I wasn't expecting you to post this...but then again I should have...lol. *is giddily speechless*

Once again, thanks for the poem love. <3 it ^-^ *kiss*

[Nesquik]

Ice: Wow, lovely poem, i like it's flow ^^

Orihemi: It would be easier to read if it were divided, since now it's just a huge stanza.
Anyway, i like the mix of beauty, love and nature. Good job

[Orihemi]

Thanks a lot! I'll remember that! :)

[Icestorm]

Orihemi, was your poem some how related to mine in any way? :/ Because if it wasnt then you shouldnt post in my poem's thread please.

[Isis]

Orihemi, love. You need to create your own thread when posting a poem :) I'll move it to a new thread for you.

[Orihemi]

thanks sorry about that.

[Sin]

That was damn good... damn good indeed. It flowed very well, reading it was very stimulating.