Confessions

[Sin]

I am sorry Shreya, Mariam, Mia
I never meant to do those things to you.
I never ever thought that i would hurt you.
I never stopped to think
that you could actually love me.

I am sorry Ashley, Selena, Francis
I knew you were friends
but my conscious didn't kick in to stop me.
I never thought that you would fight over words
I spoke to each and everyone of you.

I am sorry Karen, Anna and Milla
I never thought you'd get attached to me
You all knew after all i wasn't going to be around.
But while it lasted there wasn't
quite anything like you and I was there?

To Stacy, Victoria, Angelina...
and everyone else i didn't list.
Don't think ill of me, I was young
brash, stupid and I pray you forgive me

But i never thought of anyone of you as a conquest.
I may not know where you are but
I often think of what could have been
As i sit alone in my room
thinking of the old days when it seemed I had it all

These days Regret is all that fills me
As I can't help but remember
the way you smelled
and the taste of your sweet embrace.
I pray you forgive.

[Joe Black]

I can sense the sincerity of this poem, and I would just like to say that you are not alone in this. I myself have done some stupid things to another, who cared for me, in my youth.

[zen]

Yea this poem is really sincere and also dude your a total playa, but it was good.

[Sin]

LMAO... And too think i was actually thinking that i made this one too short.

[zen]

rofl uh-oh here comes confessions part two, you must be usher.

[Sin]

LOL, you alright..

I may just do that too, the irony of the tittle completely escaped me until you pointed it out.

[zen]

thats my supreme eye, lets leave this convo here before a mod busts us and such. <.< >.>

[Ai]

A nice simple idea for the basis of this piece and you've delivered it really well with a nice setup using your friends names with the repetition at the start of each stanza then explaining why your confessing to them.

The only problem I see with this piece is that I think it would work better if you had a stanza or two less in length..Because although the repetition is nice it does get stale after a small while.

Keep up the good work..^^

[Sin]

A nice simple idea for the basis of this piece and you've delivered it really well with a nice setup using your friends names with the repetition at the start of each stanza then explaining why your confessing to them.

The only problem I see with this piece is that I think it would work better if you had a stanza or two less in length..Because although the repetition is nice it does get stale after a small while.

Keep up the good work..^^

Could you be a little more specific? Am not sure i caught your meaning. Like getting rid of a stanza or merging it with another?