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kakudo
03-26-2008, 12:29 AM
Here A little tast of some of the stuffs I do:http://C:\Documents and Settings\Jaalyn\My Documents\My eBooks\Kingdom%20Hearts%202%20Exlusiv[1]




when I layed with you that night,
my heart skiped a beat and told me you were the one
you were so perfect, so pure you're beautifull eyes glistening in the moonlight
you wisper sweet nothings to me as we lay beside eachother
my heart says ever so sillently as if almost in a wisper in the stillness of the night,
"My love, were have you been my knight in shining armor."

Pipp-ORK
03-26-2008, 01:44 AM
There's a specific section for stuff like this. I'll move the thread over there.

kakudo
03-27-2008, 09:25 PM
well thanks......

Nerk
03-27-2008, 09:37 PM
I Dont Like Poetry...Bores Me! :sad Sorry

Sin
03-27-2008, 09:53 PM
the ending where it says "... the way you like it " to make it flow better you should say "...the way you really want it to be". Other then its nice and short.

edit: Could be a little longer