Fight for Life

[Ai]

Fight for Life


Fight for your life,
Fight to survive,
Fight for your honor,
Fight for another's.

Many fights we've encountered in life,
Many more have yet to come.
All I can say is that when the next one comes,
I'll be ready.

[Sin]

Ending needs work doesn't really go with the first half of the poem.

[zen]

yea it's kinda boring at the front, not a lot of flow, it's good.

[Joan]

I like it, simple and nice..
Reminds me of Robert Frost a bit actually...

Gj imo : )

[Ai]

Thanks for your comments, the ending isn't suspposed to go with the first half of the piece it's meant to break the flow in the middle and begin with a new flow thats why I chose to put it as a second stanza otherwise i would have just had it as one big one.