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Sin
03-29-2008, 07:17 PM
No sunshine,
Only rain.
Lighting strikes,
followed by thunder.
I have no umbrella,
Not a coat,
Nor a hat
No gifts to give
and when you leave
I will remain here
wet and smiling
Remembering the
memories that you
gave to me.

teh_biz
03-29-2008, 07:24 PM
ooh me leik!!

Sin
03-29-2008, 08:38 PM
Thnx, always happy to hear my work is appreciated

Alerane
03-31-2008, 04:33 AM
I like it, simple and meaningful

zen
03-31-2008, 05:48 AM
hmm...thats all i got for ya not one of my favorite of yours

Sin
03-31-2008, 06:16 AM
lol, too short?

Joe Black
03-31-2008, 06:22 AM
simple, yet it captures the emotion of cherishing the past. well done.

Sin
03-31-2008, 07:07 AM
thank you joe