Under the Rain

[Sin]

No sunshine,
Only rain.
Lighting strikes,
followed by thunder.
I have no umbrella,
Not a coat,
Nor a hat
No gifts to give
and when you leave
I will remain here
wet and smiling
Remembering the
memories that you
gave to me.

[teh_biz]

ooh me leik!!

[Sin]

Thnx, always happy to hear my work is appreciated

[Alerane]

I like it, simple and meaningful

[zen]

hmm...thats all i got for ya not one of my favorite of yours

[Sin]

lol, too short?

[Joe Black]

simple, yet it captures the emotion of cherishing the past. well done.

[Sin]

thank you joe