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Club Bleach Poem of the Week #16
THEME: Heat
Rules:
1. No plagiarism - It has to be your own work.
2. There is no specified length.
3. The poem can be in any style or form you want.
4. You are allowed to edit your entry as long as it is before the time limit ends.
- Last day for entries is Friday, March 28th, 2008 @ 11:59:59 PM CST
- No Reserving.
- Please no posts other than entries (Means no comments)
Prizes:
1st - +rep from Ai, iladys, 2nd place and 3rd place
2nd - +rep from Ai and Mirage
3rd - +rep from Ai
Let's start this :)
untitled
Hardly a feeling,
Can't touch a thing.
Coldness is spreading,
Darkness creeping in.
A single flicker,
A brief strike.
A small piece of heat,
A small bit of heaven.
Break
Fading,
As seconds turn to pages
Of history kept,
irreplaceable.
Tensing,
As the mind relaxes
Contrasting reality,
Hold back.
Whispering,
as senses evolve louder
Silencing ambition,
Nothing more.
Accepting..
as the heat of the moment lingers,
Break free.
Icestorm
04-03-2008, 11:45 AM
Burned Faith
Risen in the passion,
A raging inferno of hate
Threatening to consume reality, but
Water has its ways like fate.
Blazing in the hearts of many,
I see lies,
Constructed from pressure,
A Sin reflected in eyes.
Captured in the moment,
A cause blurred by men,
Selfish desires win over
The book of pen.
Yet some hold on
To that string of repise,
Taken in heart,
A bold path of despise.
The searing corruption,
Still stands on its limb,
But still they follow on
Believing in,
Him.
(Corrected minor spelling error)
Katen Kyoukotsu
04-04-2008, 02:19 AM
Heat
A hand comes forth from the darkness
and plunges into the fire.
It burns, the skin bubbles
and white bone shows through
slowly polished by the flame.
But the hand does not move.
It no longer knows how.
For it is infused with the very stuff of life.
ikkaku's girl
04-05-2008, 01:50 AM
I wasn't sure if this was 18+ or not...
Green Starlight
As you gaze upon me,
the stars peek down from heaven
to glimpse the soft moonlight
caress your perfect features
through the white cotton sheets
that lie across your back.
For a moment,
we remain still,
breathing in seduction
as your warmth surrounds me,
hovering like a blanket over my shaking body.
Our lips, and hips, and legs collide,
each extensive encounter burning,
and every light brush chilling,
every inch of me yearning and rejoicing
the warmth as you press yourself against me.
I look to the heavens;
at the many stars shining in the cold night sky,
all shaking with envy and longing
for the heat of your passionate touch.
I hope i didn't over do it...
I can't remember
the last time i felt like this.
All i can think about
is how bad i really want your love.
Can you feel it?
Come a little closer,
let the two of us become one.
Feel the heat of my
fire inside you love.
How does it feel
when I go in deep?
Tell me how does it feel?
I want to know
everything that
runs through your mind.
The sound of your
moaning drives me crazy.
And the way your
juices are flowing
when your hips start going...
Tell me how does it
feel when we make love?
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