The setting sun

[Katen Kyoukotsu]

There's a cramp in my back
and it wont go away.
No matter what I do or say.

I stand up straight
I walk tall.
But when I rest I nearly fall.

I try to fight
every day
but nothing changes in any way.

Day in, day out
Solemnly walking
Rarely talking
Cling on
To hope

Angels haunt me,
pity in their eyes.
But I easily see past their guise.

Walk on sinner
into the sun.
Your only hope in your steadfast run.

Never wait for them,
never rest.
They cant help its for the best.

Day in, day out
Solemnly walking
Rarely talking
Cling on
To hope
Until
You choke

(hope you like)

[zen]

pretty creepy in a cool awesome way great poem, haunting angels FTW

[Baby-Pie]

wow yea hunting angels that iv not heard pretty sweet ..wonder what the person is burdend with...