The Eternal Battle {A Chi and Bludd collabo}

[Sin]

Wishing for light
hissing at the dark.
Yet without each other
neither would exist.
The brightest days
are followed by the coldest nights.
All in all the darkness recedes,
at the rise of the morning light,
Forever entwined and
locked in immortal combat.
The light brings hope and warmth,
while the darkness' ripped with despair and lost.
Seven angels for seven sins,
light is yang and dark is yin.
Always in harmony, always in sync.
Wishes for light whispered
in the darkness sink.
When they arise they
awaken the sunrise within.

[Alerane]

Great poem guys! I like the flow.

[zen]

thanx of course that wasn't me bringing the flow I has none
XD great job chi you really did make the poem great man, looking foward to more colabs with ya.

[Baby-Pie]

awesome job..i loved it you shud definately do more colabs..it brings out the best in both..carl is good with rhythm and bludd is good with words.. keep it up guys id love to see more of you two

[Sin]

I didn't think i was bad with words... (sad face). Thanks though

[Sin]

I didn't think i was bad with words... (sad face). Thanks though

[zen]

she didn't say you weren't good with words, just that you flow usually caught her eyes more.

[kakudo]

Awsome!

[Freya]

I love the play between dark and light in this one. How they balance each other and battle at the same time. I love the last line. it wraps it up nicely.
Good job.

[zen]

thanx we tried really hard with this.

[kakudo]

as abserved...

[Ai]

I enjoyed reading it immensely.

A suggestion however could you point out which parts were thought up by which person, Because i'm getting the feeling that one of you did the light related lines and the other did the dark related lines?

Am I right?

[Sin]

I guess i ish the darkness

[zen]

yup yup and I teh light XD