Pain

[vidDa]

Here is also an old one. It doesn't seem right to me, but I wanted to know what you think.
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Pain

pain growing inside,
suffocation,
smile from the outside,
own feeling negation,

the touch of love,
fades away fast,
into the skies,
into nothing..

despair carved in my heart
in my soul forever
can't never replace that part
the hurt can't be gone
...ever

you are gone
you died..
only my memory
can't die..

I want you to go
just to leave me alone
just to let me breathe
but then again alone....

[silverwolf801]

OK it was ok. myabe not your best i did spot so things here and there. But it was pretty ok. Hey but it is one your old one's anyway