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Isis
04-07-2008, 10:07 AM
Distance runs endlessly
Without mercy for pure hearts
As two souls grow fonder,
Reaching out towards uncertainty.

Will we break through pages,
of time slowly turning?
Or be lost under the steady gaze
of our current disposition?

I grasp nothing, but
the need to feel you in my arms
A desire kept, unfulfiled
A million miles apart.

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Know this isnt my greatest, and I think the flow's a bit off *shrugs*

Sin
04-11-2008, 08:04 AM
Yeah, it's not the greatest and the flow is a bit a off. I also feel like there are words missing through out it all.

Joan
04-12-2008, 06:08 PM
I agree with you about the flow, it could have been better : )
But I really like the mood you're setting, and how you make me feel the longing..

And for that I like it ^^