What do ya think?

[Wingman]

It's not just a game.
Its our life.
We live it every day.
We pour our heart and soul into it.
Never give up.
Never back down.
Never go easy.
Our world revolves around
A pair of cleats.
A ball.
A goal.
Playing the game,
The world around us is gone.
Completely focused.
It is our all.
We represent soccer.
No.
We are soccer.

[Joe Black]

I enjoyed how this poem focuses on an extreme dedication towards a single ideal, even if I'm not a huge soccer fan myself. i would invite to extend it some more in terms of soccer gameplay, but the simplicity of this poem is effective.

[Wingman]

Well thank you.
This was my first go at it. I like the simple and powerful wordplay in poetry, thats usually my style.

[Joan]

I like how you really make us feel how much you like soccer : )
And some of the feelings you might feel when playing it!

I also like this form on a poem, it makes it powerfull imo : )

GJ!

[Chi]

could be better