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Isis
04-14-2008, 11:20 AM
Club Bleach Poem of the Week #18

THEME: Separation

Rules:

1. No plagiarism - It has to be your own work.
2. There is no specified length.
3. The poem can be in any style or form you want.
4. You are allowed to edit your entry as long as it is before the time limit ends.
- Last day for entries is Friday, April 18th, 2008 @ 1:59:59 PM CST
- No Reserving.
- Please no posts other than entries (Means no comments)

Prizes:

1st - +rep from Ai, iladys, 2nd place and 3rd place
2nd - +rep from Ai and iladys
3rd - +rep from Ai

Let's start this :)

Ai
04-15-2008, 08:23 PM
Separated from my mind, Body and soul.
Adrift in the vacuum of space,
Staring down at the husk that I once was.

Separated from logic, rhyme or reason,
Wondering how well I could get along.

Separated from the truth.

Drifting amongst the stars.

Nowhere else to go.

Toasty
04-16-2008, 12:17 AM
I walk through the door
A letter rests on the floor
Our divorce papers

Chi
04-16-2008, 12:21 AM
Alone

Personal beliefs
of Jesus Christ
have shattered to pieces,
as i walk amongst the bodies
left upon this field
I find No truth in you.
Thus i lost my god, plus
demonic intents
of malcontents
drive wedges within
my brain as I barely retain
any connections to
the man I once was.
I have lost my faith.
Separate I remained
unable to hear his voice
long since been
forsaken by god.

Isis
04-16-2008, 08:45 AM
After All

Cold winds chill me,
as static fills emptiness
Yet still I look on..

Left wondering,
as little things give you away
Why am I here..?

Caught,
I'm slowly drowning
In a headstrong facade..

I should leave.

Away,
From bittersweet memories
I subside..

I told you I wouldn't cry..
I lied.

silverwolf801
04-16-2008, 11:40 AM
Seperated

Together we played for many hours
We went through the days of April showers
We went hand in hand in everything we accomplished
We sat beside each other and told our wishes

But then suddenly you were gone
and I was alone with fond memories of you
I no longer played for many hours
I just sat and looked at the flowers through my window

I no longer enjoyed April showers
it just reminded me of the dour days ahead
I no longer thought of wishes
I just sat and waited for the days to pass

I sat and wondered why did we, the two us get
Separated........

Joe Black
04-18-2008, 05:04 AM
Leaving

Good riddance
You never meant anything to me
At all

You were just another person!
-- Whom I loved
The object that had blessed every dream
And then in
Those nightmares I was cursed

For loving you was my
Biggest Mistake
To establish a relationship with you
Only to have it break
That which this heart
Cannot take

To seperate from you
To expel you from my mind
Is the greatest thing that could ever happen to me
From the place we once met
I run

I go away
I shall never come back
Towards the sunset's embrace
Before you destroy all
Of the love I'll still have for you.

Katen Kyoukotsu
04-18-2008, 06:27 AM
Last Night in a Small Town Off the Coast of Italy

Cobblestones clicked beneath her heels
and I felt the way she swayed.
With every step a natural depth
though her skirt was tattered and frayed.

Father Kray silently prayed
wishing us well as we turned
away from his alter and into the world
with our minds and wit well churned.

And very well learned,
we searched through the deep
souls, hearts, lands, and homes.
And something seeped, something to keep.

Though two rarely reap what’s sown.
Her heels still clicked, her skirt still frayed
but her heart was now unknown.
And my hand strayed away, falling
apart from its one true home.

SoundWave
04-18-2008, 07:23 AM
Sonnet of: will to contrast

To whom am I to turn to
Silent nights speak to you as I remain silent
Listen to the both of us, yet no-one listen
Dreams of you seem more like bad dreams

Left I am, now there is nothing of you left
Strife within conscious hearts strife
Pain so real, unlike any other pain
So deep and true, how could you wound me so?

No longer easy on the eyes, not to you, no
For my beauty is gone, what do I live for?
Stay near me and for you I will forever stay
Be dear to me, for cherished you will always be

Someday you will be loved, some.. -day
Take a leap of faith and your life... I will take