True love

[Chi]

My love for you it's...
so deep it lights my soul on fire
It's so strong it could pull the moon from its orbit
and still those words do it no justice.

((dedicated to a special someone, she knows who she is.))

[Baby-Pie]

hmm nice but mayb its too small???
i dont know if u can call it a poem lol..try makin a lil bigger though it might not be as good as only that...mehh its still good

[Isis]

^ lol.

Well Lucy, that is still considered a poem even if its short :P

Thought the third line was a bit too long but it works out nonetheless. A truly beautiful poem, Carl :)

[kakudo]

that was beautifull....

[Chi]

Thank you!! ^^

so many pretty girls enjoying my poetry am flattered

[ladyrukia]

i really like that one too. it might be my fave so far