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SoundWave
04-18-2008, 08:05 AM
As we walk toward blue and empty skies..
A gray fog rips through the earth as it cries..

A hawk dives by into the puddle of black sea,
From the depth resonate it's plea to be free.

Yet you wonder "why will no-one listen to me?",
While modern apes assume the middle-point of society.

Lex
04-18-2008, 09:14 AM
Sorta nice...makes sense as a whole.I like it.

SoundWave
04-18-2008, 09:32 AM
Rant poems for the win, huh XD

Thanks for the comment, much appreciated :)

Lex
04-18-2008, 09:40 AM
*Grin* I'm with the writer's guild, my job to check all the writing here and there.