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Yamamoto
05-26-2008, 09:48 AM
Club Bleach Poem of the Week #24
THEME: Childhood
Rules:
1. No plagiarism - It has to be your own work.
2. There is no specified length.
3. The poem can be in any style or form you want.
4. You are allowed to edit your entry as long as it is before the time limit ends.
- Last day for entries is Saturday, May 30th, 2008 @ 1:59:59 AM CST
- No Reserving.
- With your entry, please give a suggestion of a potw theme.
- Please no posts other than entries (Means no comments)
Prizes:
1st - +rep from Ai, iladys, 2nd place and 3rd place
2nd - +rep from Ai and iladys
3rd - +rep from Ai
Let's start this :)
Icestorm
05-26-2008, 10:44 AM
Golden Horizons
Butterflies lit on horizons,
Filled with golden laughter.
Reflected in eyes, are dreams,
Long since put away.
Your childishly charmed fun,
Overthrown by the weight
Of society's burdens,
Your left remembering.
Sprinkled into the wind,
Your giggles and play.
Replaced by the truth,
Of tears and fears.
Confused and conquered,
Your child left inside,
Is put to sleep.
And remains only shown,
When your eyes light up,
And your lips part,
It escapes.
Bursting free,
In your smile.
Mendelson Shape
05-26-2008, 09:58 PM
To Relive is to Regret
give me my candy apples
and tasty sweets,
carnivals, fairs,
salt water taffy treats,
a taste of youth
for a bitter grey,
mind so innocent,
and luster each day,
bring back my summer evenings,
of times to remember,
first kisses, near misses,
a taste of which to savor,
alas, a wish i would procure,
just one last day,
for me to play,
a dream i shall enjoy for sure.
my potw theme decision
shall be on: confusion
Fantasies
As a child
Running wild
Between the trees
Through the fall leaves
In winter and snow
The children go
With eager smiles
To winter land isles
When spring is near
Children’s ear
Listen to the sound
Of joy they found
In summer time
The green chime
Make children laugh
On grownups behalf
Remember the times
When the music and rhymes
In childhoods’ dreams
Where it all seems
Life has no end
My suggestion for next theme: forsaken
Innocent
Born innocent as the face of a flower,
Or so we lead ourselves to believe.
But the truth that we as people have to face,
Are any of us born innocent anymore?
Frame
Smile, no pain
Simply watching a new life
Begin its uncertain path.
Touching tiny hands
God's gift.
Heaven on earth.
A story in its own
Remaining unwritten.
A tale continuing to be told.
I am but a memory
Too young to behold
But caught...in time.
A picture holds a thousand words.
Life's memories
Frozen in moments.
SoundWave
05-31-2008, 11:31 AM
Games, friends, sports and cars
Dreams about being rockstars
Being young and naive
Playing life away
Not knowing life is playing you each day
Every step is pure
Not knowing where the truth lure
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