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Mendelson Shape
05-28-2008, 02:41 AM
what is the use of a face
that can't smile,
what's the use of loving words
that isn't worthwhile,

what is the use of hands
that cannot caress,
what is the purpose of feelings
you cannot express,

what is point of speaking softly
so gently in her ear,
the purpose of love
she can't even hear,

the existence of a man
that cannot show her happiness,
what is his purpose besides
giving her sadness...

i am at loss for words
to tell her i lied,
that i cannot make her love me
God knows i tried.

Ai
06-01-2008, 05:27 PM
/me thinks this is the best so far out of the rhyming flowing types that you've had for the past few posts i've posted.

you've improved certainly and this deserves rep for your improvement..Keep on improving..;)