Happy Day

[Chi]

It was a good day,
everything went right.
Clear blue skies,
birds took flight.
Children danced,
and an old man
got a second chance
to make things right.
For me it was a good day
because she said
she loved me!!
I feel every thing's
going to be alright.

[Gowansweetpea]

Very nice Chi.......What a way to inspire while being inspired.........It has very good flow and depth of feelings are perceived...good for you...keep writing... being a romantic at heart I would love to see more writings of love inspired poetry..Thanks for sharing...

[Baby-Pie]

awww thats so cute.. shows the innocence of what love does and how u see the world with it beating in ur heart <33
good one

[Chi]

Glad you like it <333

[shiny808]

Reminds be of Sunshine, by Atmosphere. Nice job!

[Chi]

Thnx xDDD

[SoundWave]

Haha corny mate :P

But as usual your poems are a good read.

[Chi]

Banzai? is that you?

lol, only you would leave compliments like that lol xD

[Ai]

A nice piece and very bouncy, one that really cheers you up to read it. A very very nice piece..:p

[Nesquik]

Awwww, I love this piece. It's like, really happy, it has a nice flow. A really good piece =D

[Chi]

Thank you, thank you so much!!