A Question For Eternity

[Mendelson Shape]

brittle bonds
that breaks so easily,
friendship strands
unravels so willingly

comrade today,
enemy tomorrow,
happiness based,
on tomorrow's sorrow

what should we do
what should we say,
just to keep friends,
for another day

life, a mystery,
people, undoubtedly,
are one in the same

they both change
so regularly
and end up as they started,
inconclusively.

[Ai]

In this piece you've started to stray away from your rhyming rhythm that you had set up in your previous pieces which is good because it shows that your starting to expand your mind beyond the simpler stuff..:p..

Keep up the good work.

[Mendelson Shape]

i tried all kinds of styles and variations in my other poems but i wasn't satisfied. i wanted a signature piece that would reflect on me rather than on the poem itself. so i am still in the process. i think you'll know it if you happen to see it.