Sh-t

[SoundWave]

Have you seen the snake in our paradise?
You can hear it if you're sincere,
Whispering of a storm drowning us in fears.

Like morons without a cause
The three wise men run for a savior,
But in vain they put their labour.

You don't know what you miss,
When Jesus on your grave takes a piss.

Thus you are, thus you die.

Of course the reasons no one knows,
But hey, perhaps out of shit a flower grows.

[Slaughteress]

Hey... thats pretty good... ^^

[zen]

That is great poetry doctor, but saikou's babe, please read some rules, or use your common sense, and post your poetry in the right place.

[Joe Black]

@Doc: He's dead Jim.

personally, I really couldn't find myself enjoying this piece because of its vulgarity and the desanctification of the name of Jesus, but nevertheless it implied a very strong message. so in terms of what a poem should accomplish, well done.

[SoundWave]

Yeah I kinda like to be vulgar to get my point across sometimes.. :P

Thanks for the comments

[Chi]

so vulgar, *shrugs*


i liked it though