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Chi
06-06-2008, 01:51 AM
Hand in hand
I open them
I am a broken man

Did you think you did enough?
Did you think you made me smile?
Did you feel it was worth it?
Even though you hadn't seen me in a while?
Did you think it was all good?
I hadn't slept so many nights
Didn't you know i cared for you?
You've been gone for such a long time...

And here i stand
dreaming of those days
when we walked together
when you wore a long smile..
Hand in hand
I opened them
I am broken man....

Did you have a good time?
I hope he made you smile...
I hope he held you close
I hope he kissed you goodnight
I hope he didn't remind you...
of the promises you made me
I hope when he touched you,
You just forget me for a while....

Hand in hand
I opened them
I am a broken man

But now am gone... bye bye bye
Now am gone... bye bye

Night Prowler
06-06-2008, 01:56 AM
Very good, know the pain youre feeling/felt.

Chi
06-06-2008, 02:57 AM
Sorry for both of us then...

YouTube - Wendy Rene - After Laughter

Nesquik
06-06-2008, 03:15 AM
Very good, I say you try putting less byes at the end though.
GJ =D

Chi
06-06-2008, 03:25 AM
Thank you!!!

Nesquik
06-06-2008, 03:27 AM
Looks better =D
Np ^^

ladyrukia
06-06-2008, 03:35 AM
i too have felt like that. when my guy friend lied to me and long story

Baby-Pie
06-08-2008, 01:23 AM
love it carl awesome put together or words .. felt the pain right there too :)

Chi
06-08-2008, 03:03 AM
XD

Thanks... just venting a lil