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Club Bleach Poem of the Week #26
THEME: Dance
Rules:
1. No plagiarism - It has to be your own work.
2. There is no specified length.
3. The poem can be in any style or form you want.
4. You are allowed to edit your entry as long as it is before the time limit ends.
- Last day for entries is Saturday, June 14th, 2008 @ 1:59:59 AM CST
- No Reserving.
- With your entry, please give a suggestion of a potw theme.
- Please no posts other than entries (Means no comments)
Prizes:
1st - +rep from Ai, iladys, 2nd place and 3rd place
2nd - +rep from Ai and iladys
3rd - +rep from Ai
Let's start this :)
Mendelson Shape
06-10-2008, 09:23 PM
The Ole One-Two Step
rhythm, timing,
such delicate steps
soft feet, difficult landing,
dive into musical depths
finesse, contests,
compete with different concepts.
dance, dance...
poise, form, perfect stance
these are the flamenco and
the ballroom romance,
a time to release,
break free from safety's peace,
and dance in the language of Paris.
potw theme:
Winter
Toasty
06-11-2008, 04:53 AM
Secret Dance
We move together,
You and I.
We carry the melody
Which only our hearts know.
We pulse together,
Step by step.
We feel the beat
Which only our bodies know.
We waltz together
Into another world.
We seek the passion
Which only true love knows.
We dance together
With breathtaking desire.
We reach for something
Neither of us can know.
We fall together
In forbidden ecstasy.
We find each other,
In this intimate dance.
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POTW Theme: Memoirs
Yamamoto
06-11-2008, 08:26 AM
Enter The Court
The flight of strings beckon souls
The stage is set, the grand shall step
"May I take your hand?"
Descant hearts to music beat
A close embrace we stride
Our souls are locked, we gently spin
With heads held high in pride
In Allegro-
Faster spins and faster steps
How quickly we shall fly
Across the floor with swift attack
On festive strings we ride
In Legato-
With gentle steps, a softer pace
Across the room we slide
A subtle chance to view your face
With flowing gowns you glide
In centre stage we move as one
Two souls in harmony
A million eyes stare down at us
The Soulmates' dance they'll see
Theme: Stars
vidDa
06-11-2008, 11:21 AM
The dance of the end
Humans,
allways dancing into their demise.
Allways dancing on the song of destruction.
Into their own end and annihilation.
Holding death close to them,
they start the final dance,
the dance of the end.
They step, they swing
they laugh and turn.
All for the fun of the dance,
The dance of the end.
They hold their partner close,
close to their chest, to their heart.
Knowing that this is the last dance
The dance of their end...
Theme: War/animal
SoundWave
06-11-2008, 04:07 PM
Tango with the bone carver
It
cut-,
cut-,
cuts
Burns like cigarette butts
Care for a tango?
Practiced on a mango
Swift with surgical precision
Like a scalpel that cuts your skin
The greatest sin
He goes deep, deeper than expected
Until everything has been extracted
Carved to the bone
Open and not contracted
He's never distracted
You're not a subject to be inspected
To him you're his precious selected
Care for a bone carving tango?
Practiced on a mango....
Icestorm
06-11-2008, 11:23 PM
Angel Steps
Hands taken,
In perfect harmony,
Contempt they glide
Along strings of fantasy.
A rythmic blur,
To tempt the mind
Away from the shores
Of a contorted reality.
Breathing the rapture,
Let loose in daring swirls.
Softly trodden,
Steps of heaven.
Blinded in brilliance,
In the minute time stopped,
White wings unfold,
Enveloping ecstasy.
As they stop,
My world comes back,
But the heart still beats,
To the rythmn
Of the angels grace.
Let the sadness of life
rub off as you snap your fingers;
forget the past and be loss between pure pleasure
and bliss, lose yourself in the rhythm
and snap away
go with the beat
each snap takes you deeper
no matter what genre the snap is to
the snap is universally freeing
so go ahead
drown in the sea of life
and wash aboard the beach
of the land of the free
....Just snap
pantiffel
06-12-2008, 07:54 PM
"Shall we dance?"
Our eyes meet
And a smile finds its way to your face
Soft music fills the room
A sudden movement of your feet
You take my hand
Two pieces that fit perfectly
Your actions confident
As if you had this planned
Resistance has no chance
For he knows my weak spot
He bows to me and whispers softly
“Shall we dance?”
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