Zanga
01-14-2006, 09:05 PM
Hi, this is my very first fic, so don’t worry to be cruel. This is a total re-write of Ichigo and the group and their adventures. I’ve changed the Soul society to like our world. They still go to school, get hungry and eat food. The land is divided into 75% the world is regular spirits and the rest are shinigami.
To become a shinigami, you must go threw 12 years of shinigami grade school where you primarily study Hakou spells, which are basic spells that pretty much anyone can do.
After that, you go through 5 years of the actual shinigami academy, where you learn to fight hollows, and learn Hadou and Bakudo spells which is the second level of demon magic. These are powerful spells, most based on ways to improve your chances of winning.
After that, if you graduate you are able to join the Gotei 13. From there to rank up if you want to be captain level. They are 3 ways of becoming of a captain. First way is to simply defeat the current captain in a death match which must have at least 200 of the division’s members as a witness. Second, you go under 3 tests by at least 5 of the current captains of the gotei. Lastly, if a captain has committed an extreme sin, or died in battle, you are eligible to try to become a captain, but you must recommended by at least 5 of the captains.
Even though, no matter what method you take to become captain, there is a thing that is mandatory. You must create your own Destructive Art spell (DAS). These are the highest and most powerful spells, which can only be created by a person at captain level. Currently, there are exactly 99 DAS, created by all the captains, even by the great Zaraki Kenpachi.
Ugh, sorry I blabbered forever, but I didn’t want anyone getting confused, so here it is…
The Ultimate Captain
Chapter 1: Kurosaki Ichigo and the resolve…
It was another normal day at Makubusho SGS (Shinigami grade school). The sun was shining over the extremely large city of Makubusho. A boy with messy orange hair was seating in his usual seat staring out the window while his teacher was lecturing the class on a spell. Ichigo wasn’t exactly a perfect student, cause of his constant daydreaming. Suddenly a ruler smacked Ichigo’s desk grabbing his attention. He looked up to see his teacher staring at him, which her old grey eyes.
“Kurosaki Ichigo! You are in the ninth year of SGS, yet you act like this is your second year! Shape up, the year is almost over,” the old woman yelled.
“Gomen…” Ichigo said. The teacher walked away and continued the lesson. She was right though, there was only 2 months left in the year.
Later, class ended and Ichigo walked home with his friend Kari. She was his friend for a long time, ever since they were probably in their second year. She was a little shorter than Ichigo, but he was a tall guy anyway standing 6 feet tall. She had long blonde hair, which was tied back with a big red bow.
“So how was your day Kurosaki-kun?” she asked with a gentle smile on her face.
“Sucked. Anyways are you going anywhere for the summer?” he asked.
“Yes, I got a conference right after school is over, then I have to go visit my daddy,” she answered.
Ichigo slapped his head. “Damn you Ms. Kuchiki Kari. Also, you just had to be a genius memorizing all the Hakou and Hadou spells out there. You’ve skipped ahead to the final SGS year, leaving with this crappy school,” he complained.
“I’m sorry…” she said with a sad look on her face.
“Ah, don’t cry. It’s my fault for not being as smart as you,” he said feeling a little guilty. “Anyways, you want to meet at Makubusho park tonight?” he asked.
“Umm…sure. Pick me up at seven, okay?” she instructed.
“Yes Ms. Kuchiki!” he said putting his hand over his head saluting.
Kari giggled and they went different ways.
Ichigo got home and headed upstairs but then suddenly, a middle aged man jumped out from the corner and attempted to punch Ichigo. Luckily, Ichigo was a skilled fighter, and had awesome reflexes, letting him easily dodge the punch, and hold the man in a headlock.
“What the hell is wrong with you dad! Why are you trying to kill your own son?!” Ichigo yelled out.
“Because my own son is growing up, seeing how he asked his best friend out on a date! Just seeing if you’re really a man now!” he answered only to receive a punch in the face.
“First of all, don’t talk like I’m not here. Second of all, it’s not a date! We’re just frien-wait a second…How do you know about that?” he asked but then noticed the man was gone. Ichigo looked around the corner of the hallway to see the man run towards his room.
“You friggen bastard! You were following me?! THAT’S IT; YOU ARE GOING TO DIE TODAY!” Ichigo threatened.
While intense fighting was occurring upstairs, two girls were sitting on the couch watching TV.
“Why is Onii-chan fighting now?” the little girl with butter-scotch colored hair asked.
“Who cares…Naruto is on!” the second girl with black hair under a red cap answered.
Later…
Ichigo was getting dressed for his meeting with Kari. He wore a white shirt that said ‘vibe’ on it, and wore a large white coat over it that said ‘Ichigo’ on it. He headed for the door, but the father intersected.
“Don’t forget these!” he said pulling out condoms.
“WHAT THE ****?! I don’t want those!” Ichigo yelled.
“Then use these,” the man said offering red colored condoms.
“Wait, why do you have these anyways?” Ichigo asked starting to get mad.
“Enjoy your date!” the father said pushing Ichigo out the door.
“KUROSAKI ISSHIN, I WILL KILL YOU!” Ichigo yelled out.
Anyways, Ichigo soon arrived at Kari’s house. He knocked on the door, and waited for someone to open it. The door opened to reveal a middle aged woman, with blue eyes that matched Kari’s.
“Oh, hello Ichigo. Come in, Kari will be ready in a minute,” she said.
“Thanks Hisana-san,” Ichigo thanked.
Soon Kari came down, and greeted Ichigo. She was wearing a pink shirt that said ‘HOTT’ on it with a short black jacket on over it.
“Okay, let’s go,” she said softly.
“Alright,” Ichigo agreed.
At the park…
They walked through the park together talking about stuff. They decided to take a break and both sat on bench.
“Haha, really? He sounds desperate,” she laughed out at Ichigo’s comment.
“No, I’m serious! That idiot was really checking my teacher out! I just gave him a weird look,” Ichigo said laughing.
Both just kept laughing, and noticed that it was getting dark. They decided to start heading home.
“So you’ll be at your dad’s place all summer?” Ichigo asked.
“Yep, I really miss him,” she commented. “I don’t get to see him a lot.”
Suddenly there was a weird rumbling sound. Ichigo and Kari turned around to see what could be making that racket. Suddenly a huge monster appeared and smashed Ichigo, sending him flying into a wall. Kari was terrified, seeing Ichigo unconscious on the floor.
The monster was about 20 feet tall at least. It looked like an ogre with a big white mask on. The monster then faced Kari with its tongue sticking out. “Your soul looks tasty. Let me devour you!” it yelled going in for the kill.
Just as it was about to eat her, a man in black robes appeared kicking the monster’s head, injuring it. Kari was scared, and surprised to see her rescuer.
“You’re a shinigami…” she shuddered. The bald man turned around to see the girl.
“Yeah I am. Hey wait a second, aren’t you that little Kuchiki kid?” the bald man asked.
“Yes I am. Oh my gosh, you are Madarame Ikkaku, 3rd seat of the 11th division!” she yelled out.
“That’s me!” he said with a proud tone.
Suddenly the hollow appeared again and quickly punched Ikkaku right through a brick wall. Kari was amazed by the monster’s speed. “Wait, if it could get a 3rd seat off guard…it must be a…
Before she could finish, the hollow grabbed her and was bringing her closer to its mouth. Ichigo slowly got up, unable to move his arms. His head was bleeding and left arm felt like it snapped in two.
“Kari! No!” he yelled. He was helpless. He couldn’t do anything but watch. Ichigo tried to move, but he legs were unable.
“ I Have to save her! I have to! ” he thought to himself.
“Ichigo…” a voice called out.
Ichigo was confused. It seemed as if time had stopped. Nothing was moving, except himself.
“Ichigo, do you want to save her?” the voice asked.
“Of course!” he answered looking around for who was talking.
“I can give you the power you need to save her…” the voice explained. Suddenly a katana appeared in front of Ichigo, stuck in the ground.
“Take hold of the blade, and pull it out of the ground. If you do you will gain the strength needed to defeat the hollow. If you don’t, she will die,” the voice explained.
“I will!” Ichigo declared. Before grabbing the hilt the voice yelled out…
“Wait! There are consequences to grabbing hold of the blade. If you do, you will gain power yes, but more monsters will start seeking you soul. Are you sure that you are going to do this?” the voice asked.
“Pfft, of course I will. I will take care of myself, but right now Kari is in trouble. I will save her!” he yelled out grabbing the hilt.
Suddenly time started up again, and just as the hollow was about to devour Kari, there was a huge explosion where Ichigo was. Both the hollow and Kari turned their heads to what caused the massive blast.
The smoke cleared, and revealed Ichigo. He was wearing the same robes the other shinigami was wearing. He also had a long blade over his shoulder. It looked like a normal katana, but it was almost as long as he was.
“Hey you bastard! Come pick a fight with me!” Ichigo yelled.
The hollow then dropped Kari and ran towards Ichigo. The tried an arm swipe, but Ichigo jumped up and hacked its arm off. It then tried to stomp on him, but Ichigo easily cut its leg off before it even came down. The monster then fell on his bottom, and Ichigo jumped high in the air.
“Feel my wrath for hurting my friend!” he yelled as he came down. His blade was then covered in silver light. He came down and stabbed the blade right in the center of its mask. The monster then turned to dust.
Ichigo then walked up to Kari and put his hand out wanting to help her up.
“You okay?” he asked.
Kari just stared at Ichigo.
“Hey you bums, you forgot about me!” Ikkaku yelled out angrily.
^^^^^
There it is! Hoped you like it. Working on the second chapter now, so I'll have that up maybe tonight or tommorow. The title doesn't make sense yet, but it will later in the story.
To become a shinigami, you must go threw 12 years of shinigami grade school where you primarily study Hakou spells, which are basic spells that pretty much anyone can do.
After that, you go through 5 years of the actual shinigami academy, where you learn to fight hollows, and learn Hadou and Bakudo spells which is the second level of demon magic. These are powerful spells, most based on ways to improve your chances of winning.
After that, if you graduate you are able to join the Gotei 13. From there to rank up if you want to be captain level. They are 3 ways of becoming of a captain. First way is to simply defeat the current captain in a death match which must have at least 200 of the division’s members as a witness. Second, you go under 3 tests by at least 5 of the current captains of the gotei. Lastly, if a captain has committed an extreme sin, or died in battle, you are eligible to try to become a captain, but you must recommended by at least 5 of the captains.
Even though, no matter what method you take to become captain, there is a thing that is mandatory. You must create your own Destructive Art spell (DAS). These are the highest and most powerful spells, which can only be created by a person at captain level. Currently, there are exactly 99 DAS, created by all the captains, even by the great Zaraki Kenpachi.
Ugh, sorry I blabbered forever, but I didn’t want anyone getting confused, so here it is…
The Ultimate Captain
Chapter 1: Kurosaki Ichigo and the resolve…
It was another normal day at Makubusho SGS (Shinigami grade school). The sun was shining over the extremely large city of Makubusho. A boy with messy orange hair was seating in his usual seat staring out the window while his teacher was lecturing the class on a spell. Ichigo wasn’t exactly a perfect student, cause of his constant daydreaming. Suddenly a ruler smacked Ichigo’s desk grabbing his attention. He looked up to see his teacher staring at him, which her old grey eyes.
“Kurosaki Ichigo! You are in the ninth year of SGS, yet you act like this is your second year! Shape up, the year is almost over,” the old woman yelled.
“Gomen…” Ichigo said. The teacher walked away and continued the lesson. She was right though, there was only 2 months left in the year.
Later, class ended and Ichigo walked home with his friend Kari. She was his friend for a long time, ever since they were probably in their second year. She was a little shorter than Ichigo, but he was a tall guy anyway standing 6 feet tall. She had long blonde hair, which was tied back with a big red bow.
“So how was your day Kurosaki-kun?” she asked with a gentle smile on her face.
“Sucked. Anyways are you going anywhere for the summer?” he asked.
“Yes, I got a conference right after school is over, then I have to go visit my daddy,” she answered.
Ichigo slapped his head. “Damn you Ms. Kuchiki Kari. Also, you just had to be a genius memorizing all the Hakou and Hadou spells out there. You’ve skipped ahead to the final SGS year, leaving with this crappy school,” he complained.
“I’m sorry…” she said with a sad look on her face.
“Ah, don’t cry. It’s my fault for not being as smart as you,” he said feeling a little guilty. “Anyways, you want to meet at Makubusho park tonight?” he asked.
“Umm…sure. Pick me up at seven, okay?” she instructed.
“Yes Ms. Kuchiki!” he said putting his hand over his head saluting.
Kari giggled and they went different ways.
Ichigo got home and headed upstairs but then suddenly, a middle aged man jumped out from the corner and attempted to punch Ichigo. Luckily, Ichigo was a skilled fighter, and had awesome reflexes, letting him easily dodge the punch, and hold the man in a headlock.
“What the hell is wrong with you dad! Why are you trying to kill your own son?!” Ichigo yelled out.
“Because my own son is growing up, seeing how he asked his best friend out on a date! Just seeing if you’re really a man now!” he answered only to receive a punch in the face.
“First of all, don’t talk like I’m not here. Second of all, it’s not a date! We’re just frien-wait a second…How do you know about that?” he asked but then noticed the man was gone. Ichigo looked around the corner of the hallway to see the man run towards his room.
“You friggen bastard! You were following me?! THAT’S IT; YOU ARE GOING TO DIE TODAY!” Ichigo threatened.
While intense fighting was occurring upstairs, two girls were sitting on the couch watching TV.
“Why is Onii-chan fighting now?” the little girl with butter-scotch colored hair asked.
“Who cares…Naruto is on!” the second girl with black hair under a red cap answered.
Later…
Ichigo was getting dressed for his meeting with Kari. He wore a white shirt that said ‘vibe’ on it, and wore a large white coat over it that said ‘Ichigo’ on it. He headed for the door, but the father intersected.
“Don’t forget these!” he said pulling out condoms.
“WHAT THE ****?! I don’t want those!” Ichigo yelled.
“Then use these,” the man said offering red colored condoms.
“Wait, why do you have these anyways?” Ichigo asked starting to get mad.
“Enjoy your date!” the father said pushing Ichigo out the door.
“KUROSAKI ISSHIN, I WILL KILL YOU!” Ichigo yelled out.
Anyways, Ichigo soon arrived at Kari’s house. He knocked on the door, and waited for someone to open it. The door opened to reveal a middle aged woman, with blue eyes that matched Kari’s.
“Oh, hello Ichigo. Come in, Kari will be ready in a minute,” she said.
“Thanks Hisana-san,” Ichigo thanked.
Soon Kari came down, and greeted Ichigo. She was wearing a pink shirt that said ‘HOTT’ on it with a short black jacket on over it.
“Okay, let’s go,” she said softly.
“Alright,” Ichigo agreed.
At the park…
They walked through the park together talking about stuff. They decided to take a break and both sat on bench.
“Haha, really? He sounds desperate,” she laughed out at Ichigo’s comment.
“No, I’m serious! That idiot was really checking my teacher out! I just gave him a weird look,” Ichigo said laughing.
Both just kept laughing, and noticed that it was getting dark. They decided to start heading home.
“So you’ll be at your dad’s place all summer?” Ichigo asked.
“Yep, I really miss him,” she commented. “I don’t get to see him a lot.”
Suddenly there was a weird rumbling sound. Ichigo and Kari turned around to see what could be making that racket. Suddenly a huge monster appeared and smashed Ichigo, sending him flying into a wall. Kari was terrified, seeing Ichigo unconscious on the floor.
The monster was about 20 feet tall at least. It looked like an ogre with a big white mask on. The monster then faced Kari with its tongue sticking out. “Your soul looks tasty. Let me devour you!” it yelled going in for the kill.
Just as it was about to eat her, a man in black robes appeared kicking the monster’s head, injuring it. Kari was scared, and surprised to see her rescuer.
“You’re a shinigami…” she shuddered. The bald man turned around to see the girl.
“Yeah I am. Hey wait a second, aren’t you that little Kuchiki kid?” the bald man asked.
“Yes I am. Oh my gosh, you are Madarame Ikkaku, 3rd seat of the 11th division!” she yelled out.
“That’s me!” he said with a proud tone.
Suddenly the hollow appeared again and quickly punched Ikkaku right through a brick wall. Kari was amazed by the monster’s speed. “Wait, if it could get a 3rd seat off guard…it must be a…
Before she could finish, the hollow grabbed her and was bringing her closer to its mouth. Ichigo slowly got up, unable to move his arms. His head was bleeding and left arm felt like it snapped in two.
“Kari! No!” he yelled. He was helpless. He couldn’t do anything but watch. Ichigo tried to move, but he legs were unable.
“ I Have to save her! I have to! ” he thought to himself.
“Ichigo…” a voice called out.
Ichigo was confused. It seemed as if time had stopped. Nothing was moving, except himself.
“Ichigo, do you want to save her?” the voice asked.
“Of course!” he answered looking around for who was talking.
“I can give you the power you need to save her…” the voice explained. Suddenly a katana appeared in front of Ichigo, stuck in the ground.
“Take hold of the blade, and pull it out of the ground. If you do you will gain the strength needed to defeat the hollow. If you don’t, she will die,” the voice explained.
“I will!” Ichigo declared. Before grabbing the hilt the voice yelled out…
“Wait! There are consequences to grabbing hold of the blade. If you do, you will gain power yes, but more monsters will start seeking you soul. Are you sure that you are going to do this?” the voice asked.
“Pfft, of course I will. I will take care of myself, but right now Kari is in trouble. I will save her!” he yelled out grabbing the hilt.
Suddenly time started up again, and just as the hollow was about to devour Kari, there was a huge explosion where Ichigo was. Both the hollow and Kari turned their heads to what caused the massive blast.
The smoke cleared, and revealed Ichigo. He was wearing the same robes the other shinigami was wearing. He also had a long blade over his shoulder. It looked like a normal katana, but it was almost as long as he was.
“Hey you bastard! Come pick a fight with me!” Ichigo yelled.
The hollow then dropped Kari and ran towards Ichigo. The tried an arm swipe, but Ichigo jumped up and hacked its arm off. It then tried to stomp on him, but Ichigo easily cut its leg off before it even came down. The monster then fell on his bottom, and Ichigo jumped high in the air.
“Feel my wrath for hurting my friend!” he yelled as he came down. His blade was then covered in silver light. He came down and stabbed the blade right in the center of its mask. The monster then turned to dust.
Ichigo then walked up to Kari and put his hand out wanting to help her up.
“You okay?” he asked.
Kari just stared at Ichigo.
“Hey you bums, you forgot about me!” Ikkaku yelled out angrily.
^^^^^
There it is! Hoped you like it. Working on the second chapter now, so I'll have that up maybe tonight or tommorow. The title doesn't make sense yet, but it will later in the story.