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Blader
01-18-2006, 09:35 AM
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto. Kishimoto Masashi created Naruto. I also do not own the song lyrics. They are the properties of a band called Asian Kung-Fu Generation.

My Story

Chapter 1: Ninja Generation!!!

It was a Saturday; the sixteen years old Uzumaki Naruto was walking around the village. He was wearing a black flack jacket with brown shirt underneath and green shorts. His kunai and shuriken holster is strap on his right thigh. He also wears a pouch to keep items such as soldier pills, blood stopping pills, extra kunai and shuriken and also a few rolls of bandage and most importantly, his ANBU mask. He wears his forehead protector on his upper left arm.

Walking past a training ground Naruto saw a lot of the kid his age training and sparring. There were two Genins that caught his attention. Those two are none other than the Uchiha clan survivor, Uchiha Sasuke and the other one is Kazama Yoshi, the second child of the current Hokage, the Yondaime Hokage, Kazama Shin. They were sparring using advance techniques for a Genin.

Walking on he saw a lot of people on the streets of Konoha. Walking past a couple of shop he went to a flower shop. When he entered there were a lot of beautiful flower that greeted his sight. Walking toward where the orchids were he picked a couple of them.

“Yamanaka-san, I’ll take these.” he said as he handed the lady behind the counter some money.

“Thank you and do come again.” the lady replied with a smile.

He then went to the stone memorial to place the flower on the memorial for his brother. Remembering the times they spent together, he was lost in thought.

It was night and it is now eight o’clock. Naruto was going to a bar called The Gathering for his part-time job. Once he went in he could see a lot of people drinking and laughing. The place was large and the atmosphere was warm. The tables were was place in rows in front of a small stage. On the small stage were three guys checking their guitars and drum set. Getting on the stage he picks up his guitar, an orange and white guitar and then he nods to the three guys.

“Alright guys let’s play!” he said to his band members.

“Yeah!!!” the guys shouted in reply.

Stepping up to the microphone Naruto said to the people in the bar “Hi all. I’m Naruto the singer and guitarist, this is our second guitarist Umino Iruka, Sarutobi Asuma is the bassist, and our drummer Hatake Kakashi. And we are the Ninja Generation! Okay, our first song for tonight is called Kimi to iu Hana (A Flower Called You). I hope you guys enjoy yourself tonight.”

Then the sound of drum beats and the bass guitar could be heard as Kakashi and Asuma started playing. Then the sound of electric guitars joined in. They were playing a steady beat. Naruto stop playing his guitar when he started singing.

“Miesuita foomu no zetsubou de”
“Karamawaru kokoro ga ruupu shita”
“Nanigenaku nan to naku susumu”
“Yodomi aru sutoorii”
“Itsu datte nani ka wo ushinatte”
“Sono tabi ni bokura wa kyou wo shiru”
“Imi mo naku nan to naku susumu”
“Yodomi aru sutoorii”
“Tsumari tada sore kudakechitta dake”

Playing his guitar again, there was a pause in his singing. For Naruto this was the best thing he ever experience in his life because one of his dream was coming true. Ever since he saw his brother played the guitar he’s playing now he wanted to play a guitar like his brother and play in a band. Singing again, Naruto can’t help but smile as the people in the bar started to pay attention to the band.

“Minukareta bokura no yokubou de”
“Kiekakaru kokoro ga ruupu shita”
“Nanigenaku nan to naku susumu”
“Yodomi aru sutoorii”
“Itsu kara ka nani ka wo ushinatte”
“Kakushiteta hontou no boku wo shiru”
“Imi mo naku nan to naku susumu”
“Yodomi aru sutoorii”

“Tsumari tada sore kudakechitta dake”
“Tsumari tada sore kaze ni matta dake”
“Kimi no me ni tada hikaru shizuku”
“Aa, seiten no hekireki”
“Itami dake nara ni toubun sa, sou sa”
“Bokura no iro”
“Shiroi iki ga kireru made”
“Tobashite kakenuketa ano michi”
“Oka no ue kara mieru machi ni saita”
“Kimi to iu hana mata sakasu yo”

There was another long pause in Naruto’s singing as he played the guitar. Playing their instrument, the other band members had beads of sweats on their smiling faces. They were happy because the people on the bar seem to like them.

“Tsumari tada sore kudakechitta dake”
“Tsumari tada sore kaze ni matta dake”
“Kimi no me ni tada hikaru shizuku”
“Aa, seiten no hekireki”
“Itami dake nara ni toubun sa, sou sa”
“Bokura no iro”
“Shiroi iki ga kireru made”
“Tobashite kakenuketa ano michi”
“Oka no ue kara mieru machi ni saita”
“Kimi to iu hana mata sakasu yo”

“Kimi rashii iro ni”

They played their instrument for another minute before they finally stop. They people in the bar was clapping for them. All the band members have smiles on their faces. Taking a short break they went to drink some water. Refreshed, they went to play another song.

“All right, this song is one of my favorite. It’s called Haruka Kanata (Far-off Distance). I hope you guys enjoy this song.

The sound of Asuma’s bass guitar the sound of Kakashi’s drums started the song soon followed by Naruto’s guitar and lastly Iruka’s guitar. Naruto then started to sing.

“Fumikomuze akuseru kake hiki wa naisa sou dayo”
“Youru wo nukeru”
“Nejikomu sa saigo ni sashihiki zero sa sou dayo”
“Hibi wo kezuru”

“Kokoro wo sotto hiraite gyutto hiki yosetara”
“Todokuyo kitto tsutau yo motto sa aa”

A brief pause in Naruto’s singing before him continuing, half screaming half singing the next part of the lyrics.

“Iki isoide shiboritotte”
“Motsureru ashi dakedo mae yori zutto sou tokue”

“Ubaitotte tsukandatte”
“Kimi ja nai nara imi was naniosa”

“Dakara motto, motto, motto, haruka kanata”

“Fumikomuze akuseru kake hiki wa naisa sou dayo”
“Youru wo nukeru”
“Nejikomu sa saigo ni sashihiki zero sa sou dayo”
“Hibi wo kezuru”

“Kokoro wo sotto hiraite gyutto hiki yosetara”
“Todokuyo kitto tsutau yo motto sa aa”

“Iki isoide shiboritotte”
“Motsureru ashi dakedo mae yori zutto sou tokue”

“Ubaitotte tsukandatte”
“Kimi ja nai nara imi was naniosa”

“Dakara haruka kanata”

After screaming the last part of the song, there was another pause before he sang the next.

“Itsuwaru ko do ni nareta kimi no sekai wo”
“Murizubusu no sa shiroku shirou”

Once the song ended, people were clapping for the band again. Playing a few more fantastic songs they reached the last song for the night.

“Okay people, this is the last song for tonight. We hope you enjoy our performance and we hope to see you again next week. Same time, same place. Now this last song is special to me because it describes my childhood pretty well, before I met my brother. It’s called Siren.”

One by one the band started to play their instrument starting with Kakashi and his drums, then Naruto and his guitar, after that Iruka with his guitar and Asuma with his bass guitar. Stepping up to the microphone after he stopped playing his guitar, Naruto started to sing.

“Tsukanda hosoi ude”
“Yogiru kagerou”
“Kirei na hane o boku ni kure yo”

“Uruonda tooi me”
“Yogiri, kagerou no you ni yurai de kieru kimi o”

“Toke ochiru kokoro sono mama de”
“Sameyaranu shiroi shoudou itai yo”
“Kakenukeru machi no katasumi de nari yamanu kimi no SAIREN”
“Hiraite yo”

“Sennen saki o sennen saki o omoi egakenai kedo”
“Issun saki o issun saki o kizamu koto de hajimaru wazuka na negai”


“Toke nokoru kokoro sono mama de”
“Iekiranu kizu fusai de itai yo”
“Kakenukeru machi no katasumi de hibiki naru kimi no SAIREN”
“Hiraite yo”

“Sonzai shoumei o narase”
“SAIREN SAIREN”

“Sonzai shoumei o narase”
“SAIREN SAIREN”

After Naruto screamed the last word of the song, the music gets faster and faster before it calmed down a bit and suddenly stops. The people in the bar were clapping their hands and cheering at the band’s performance.

After their performance the band went to a table at the bar. It was 11 o’clock. The bar was now almost empty except for the band, the owner and a few people who want to drink more. Kakashi was sitting beside Asuma and Iruka was sitting beside Naruto.

“Great performance tonight guys. I can’t wait for the next show.” Naruto said to the band while he takes a sip of his Cola.

“Me too.” agreed Asuma.

“Same here.” said Iruka.

“Yeah.” Kakashi said while reading his perverted book giggling and blushing.

“So, did you guys hear that Jiraiya is in town.” asked Naruto.

“Really, I didn’t know that.” answered Asuma.

“Yeah, and rumor has it that he’s going to stay here permanently.” continued Naruto.

“That’s great. I’m sure he’s going to come here regularly.” said Iruka.

“So what are we going to do tomorrow? I mean we don’t have anything planned to do tomorrow and all of us don’t have any mission to do until Monday.” asked Iruka.

“Well, how ‘bout we just train for tomorrow. I’m sure Shin doesn’t want us to get rusty with our skills.” said Asuma to his fellow ANBU teammates.

“Yeah I’m sure my bro doesn’t want us to get rusty too.” said Naruto.

“How bout we meet at the usual place at 2 o’clock.” Naruto said.

“I got to go now guys. See you guys tomorrow.” Naruto continued as he got up and began leaving. All the guys then said their goodbyes.

Walking down streets of Konoha with no destination in mind, Naruto just wandered the streets aimlessly. Drinking a can of Cola he bought earlier, he looks at his surrounding, finding himself at a clearing. Crushing the now empty can of Cola he threw it into a garbage can that was under a tree near him. Sitting down on the earth he looks up to sky, only to see the stars and the full moon that glows an unearthly white. Smiling at the sense of peace that the moon has on him, he lies down and continued to stare up at the night sky.

His moment of peace however was interrupted by the sounds of footsteps coming his way. Wondering who it was, he looks at the direction where the sound of footsteps was coming from, only to see a girl a little older than him walking towards him. The girl, a little taller than him, has long blond hair and sea blue eyes. She was wearing the standard Jounin uniform with her head protector tied on her upper right arm.

Standing up, he walked away, not wanting to be seen by the Hokage’s daughter. Walking on the streets, he heads to his apartment he used to share with his brother. Arriving at his apartment he went straight to his bed. He was laying there, half asleep, thinking about his brother and how he used to train him how to fight and how he taught him how to play a guitar. And then he finally falls asleep.

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto. Kishimoto Masashi created Naruto. I also do not own the song lyrics. They are the properties of a band called Disagree.

My Story

Chapter 2: Another day in the life

It was a Saturday and it was dusk in village hidden in the leaf. Naruto was currently on his way to The Gathering to play another show. Strap to his back was his guitar. Turning at a corner, he saw the bar. Entering the door he saw the place was packed with people. ‘Wow, this place sure full. I wonder if they came here to hear us play.’ he thought. Making his way to the small stage he saw the other band members are all ready for the show. Jumping up to the stage he nods to guys and yelled “Let’s jam!”

Playing the intro to Scarecrow Adams the mood began to turn somber. Naruto strumming his guitar is soon joined by Kakashi playing a steady marching beat. Soon Iruka and Asuma joined in with their instruments. Stepping up to the microphone Naruto started to sing.

“I want it I got it I lost it then I found it”
“If you’re there then I guess I’ll see you when we get there”
“So we engrave on our graves all the things we want to say”
“Live and die I don’t know why I’ve got my head up high”

“My life I feel like I should die I wonder why”
“I had it all before I had it all that’s why we say”
“I don’t want to go my life I feel like I should die I wonder why
“I had it all and that’s why we say”
“Hey……...but I don’t want to go”

“So we shift and we flied for a hundred miles to get here”
“So why don’t you come round my way and help break this silence”
“I don’t why I don’t know if I had it even if tried”
“Live and die I don’t why I’ve got my head up high”

“My life I feel like I should die I wonder why”
“I had it all before I had it all that’s why we say”

Naruto stopped singing and the band started to play the instrumental bridge.

“My life I feel like I should die I wonder why”
“I had it all before I had it all that’s why we say”
“I don’t want to go my life I feel like I should die I wonder why”
“I had it all and that’s why we say”
“Hey……...but I don’t want to go”

After they were done Naruto stepped up to the microphone to say something. “Hello! The song that we just played was called Scarecrow Adams. We hope everybody enjoyed that song. Next up we are gonna play a song titled Suicide Note.”

Playing the intro to Suicide Note the people in the bar started to pay attention to the band. Playing a somber but slow music Naruto started to sing.

“Trouble follows me to my doorsteps I don’t want to know”
“Blood from Heaven and things from Hell they’re forcing me to go”
“So when you start to realize that I get no more sleep oh brother”
“So when I walk and when I so when I talk and it’s turning”
“It’s turning it’s turning turning turning turning”

“I Left my suicide note on the door”
“Once more”

“The pipe is blowing and they’ve started searching I’m not afraid to go so bring me”
“So when I walk and when I so when I talk and it’s turning it’s turning its turning turning turning turning”
“So when you feel like love so when you think above and there’s nobody there and there’s nobody here”
“So when you feel estranged and there’s no complaints dear God I’m turning I’m turning I’m turning turning turning turning”

“I Left my suicide note on the door”
“Baby wont you look me in the eye once more? Once more”
“Lost In eyes and well it can’t stand in my way”
“Hit me honey I left my things down to play”

Playing the instrumental bridge, the band played their instrument gracefully until the end of the song. Taking a break the band drank some water to cool down. Stepping up to the microphone, Naruto introduces the next song.

“The next song is one of my favorite song it’s called Ghosting. We hope you like it.” Playing a melodic intro the music soon turned heavy as it enters the first verse. Naruto then started singing.

"Bored now I’ll go awhile"
"So we’ll stay with me awhile"

"I’ve got eyes wide shut"
"Move over we’re staying awhile… but what are you going for?"

"Blind my spade I’m gone today"
"Why don’t you go anyway?"
"Please stand up for me today"
"But I was the one for you"

"I’ve got all my good shit stinks"
"Please stand up from me to you"
"I’ve got all my love my way"
"But I was the one for you"

Entering the instrumental bridge Naruto stopped singing and the band started played some heavy guitar chords.

"We’ll trade places so"
"I can be that known"
"But I was the one for you"
"My God I feel safe"
"why don’t you go there"
"Blood in my hands for what? I’ve never had nobody"
"hold me up this time but"
"Try……."
"Me.."
"try me and"
"hold me up my…"

"Blind my spade I’m gone today"
"Why don’t you go anyway?"
"Please stand up for me to you"
"But I was the one for you"
"I’ve got all my good shit stinks"
"Please stand up from me to you"
"I’ve got all my love my way"
"But I was the one for you”

The band continued to play some more songs until late into the nights. After they were done the band members went to their homes except Naruto.

He just wonders the forest outside Konoha. Taking a bit of rest he sat on an old log, drinking a can of Cola. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a shadow flickered. Raising his senses he could smell and hear the person sneaking around. Seemingly relaxed, he continued to sip his drink.

Suddenly the shadow behind Naruto flickered again. Jumping away, Naruto managed to dodge a volley of shurikens heading to were he was sitting. Throwing the can of Cola he just finished, he took out a kunai. Scanning his surroundings he saw a flicker of a shadow under a tree. He threw the kunai to where he saw the flicker of movement nearly hitting its target.

Moving around under the aid of the shadow, the unknown ninja sneaked behind Naruto and tried to slash him with a kunai, but was blocked by Naruto. Gripping the ninja's wrist, he twisted the ninja's hand behind her. Naruto now had a kunai to her neck. Creating a few Kage Bunshin that surounded them he asked “So who are you?”

Trapped the ninja have no choice but to answer. “Shiroi.” answered a feminine voice.

“Shiroi, one the Cloud’s Nuke-nin. So why did you attacked me?” asked Naruto in a deadly voice that made Shiroi shiver.

“Do you really want to know?” she said. He nodded and she continued. “I'm not gonna tell you.”

“Never mind, I gotta straighten this out.” he said with a sigh. Placing his hand on her shoulder he whispered the word “Nemuri.” As soon as he said it, the female ninja slumped to the ground. Picking the Nuke-nin up, he carried her on his shoulder.

“Now gotta see the Hokage ‘bout this.” he said. He ran all the way to the Hokage Tower. Jumping up, entered the Hokage’s office via the window. “Yo! Yon-sama I got something for you.” Naruto said to the Yondaime.

“What is it Naruto? It better be important.” said the Hokage. He was just going sleep when Naruto interrupted him.

“I got a Cloud Nuke-nin on my shoulders.” Naruto said as he placed the said ninja on a chair. “I knocked her out using a Genjutsu.”

“And why do you have an unconscious ninja with you, not to mention the fact that said ninja is a Cloud Nuke-nin.” said Shin eyeing Naruto like a hawk.

“She was trying to kill me.” answered Naruto. “I got to go now Yon-sama, I trust you will take care of this and her.” he continued.

“Don’t worry Naruto, I’ll get to the bottom of this.” assured the Hokage.

Pipp-ORK
01-24-2006, 05:48 AM
It's good, but sometimes, your sentences run on, and you give too much information at once. Another thing; when you're describing your character's clothing, don't be TOO detailed. It distracts the reader from what's actually going on. @_@

'Neways, is there more? I'd like to see what happens next. :doindadom

Blader
01-24-2006, 10:35 AM
Thanks for the review. Yeah theres more, I'll edit into to my first post. Be sure to check it out.