[Stumbling through the Night]

[setlogix]

A ten-line poem I wrote for a class assignment a few years back.

The murky darkness blankets all
Where the clouded shadows fall
Senses robbed, trembling with fright
I stumbled through the starless night
Twisted trees creaked sorrowful tales
Their brethren joined in shrieking wails
I pulled the cloak around me near
To drive away my growing fear
But suddenly, before my widened eyes,
From beneath the clouds the moon did rise.

[Shaehl]

Personally, I like poety about as much as getting stabbed in the heart, but for what it's worth, I think you did a nice job. I myself am being forced to write poetry for my creative writing course, so I might be posting some stuff later on.

[HallowDude]

yay rhyming stanza poem
poetry isnt for emos, its for ppl who can posses the ability to look into others emotions :biggrinki

[Anil]

... Um.. what makes you say emos can't look into other people's emotions...?

Though I can't generally take poetry in more than small doses, I must say that your poem is good. It flows really well and the descriptions reach beyond the page. Most excellent.

[HallowDude]

=P im saying poetry isnt for emos but insted for thepeople who posseses the ability