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Crystal Blade
01-22-2006, 08:17 PM
Clueless

I'm listening to my heart
Wondering what to do
I'm feeling the wind pass by
Wondering where I should go
Through sight and through sound
And senses through internal vision
Some things take a while
For me to make a decision
Am I light or am I darkness?
Do I really have to choose?
Why can't I be grey or light blue?
What would you do in my shoes?
Day in and day out, I continue thinking
Thinking, and in thought, I sigh
As sure as I act, without a care in the world
I'm completely clueless, no matter how much I deny
What comes of the future?
The times ahead we plan
What comes of the past?
The times behind I want to remember, but can't
I'm caught in a world
Where I don't feel like I belong
I've felt this way for a while
I've felt it all along
Clueless in the world as we see it
What am I to do?
I can't face everything alone forever
I'm probably just waiting for someone to be there too...

MaskedDrifter
01-22-2006, 11:10 PM
Hey that was a good one. Keep em up.:headbang:

ADMBird
01-25-2006, 03:30 AM
Claps Hands.

SLVR
01-29-2006, 07:42 AM
I also liked it. Make another soon

Byakuya7
02-20-2006, 07:04 PM
Yes I liked it, there were instances where the rhyming would become a little akward but nothing huge. good work.

M_A
02-21-2006, 02:36 AM
Great poem, man. I'm impressed.