meet me in the bathroom(not the title, just a random thought)

[moatism]

my writing is really, really random, and this is the closest thing to a solid peice of work in my notebook.


you'll curse the day i walked throught that door
you want nothing to do with me, but its too late
were things better before me?
unintended you left me naked and vacant
i'll be lost without you, but at least i'll know the truth
i think of how i shattered your glasshouse life
and how the stained glass shards tore apart the walls to my heart
i haven't the strength to turn away but am too naive to not linger
it comforts me to think that you haven't made up your mind
it scares me to think that you already have
i guess i'm just meant to die alone...
the warm pain i feel in my chest when i think of you is unbearable
but part of me is in love with it...
it tells me that my heart still beats.

[Pipp-ORK]

That's really good, Moatilliatta. :eek13: More on the depressing side, but me likes~!

[moatism]

hahaha! shutup you! ^_^. all my stuff is depressing, kinda.....i'm not a...... "chipper" person, i'm very dark and emo...although if you saw me...you'd never be able to figure that out.^_^,. plus i have my bright, happy, social moments too.

[moatism]

*not a double post!

here's a really dark one, that i didn't finish...


-with your last dying breath you will beg for my forgiveness,
you will beg for my mercy, for my benevolence...
you are worthy of nothing but my most malicious cruelty
the duality of my hate for you begs the bullets attention
the grace of your cynicism paralyzes me to a slow grinding quiver...

thats all i got to. didn't finish.....don't know why.

here's one about love! see, not depressing

-that face, that smile, that smell, that touch, that feeling...
i wish i could keep them with me forever
i wish i could experience them over,
and over again whenever i wanted
when i experienced them, i was in heaven
an edon of emotion and sensuality.
your smell: the scent of pure beauty, it was like that godly smell in the air right before rain
your touch: the warmth of your embrace was to die for. it made my soul breath again
your face: your face...a face the likes of which no seraph has ever beheld, nor any god could bear to have ill-will towards
your smile: with the power to destroy any hatred or anger that exists in my heart. with the power to make my dead heart beat once again
your body: all i can do is smirk as i think of the ways i would please you and how i want you with me.


the end

[Pipp-ORK]

:eek13:
Ohh, the first one was dark. I LIKE IT. I wish I could write poem-ish things, but the only time I tried, it turned into some freaky THING about a giant and his althelete's foot. :( Sad it is..
benevolence
I like that word. BENEVOLENCE. Heehee.
The second one was happy-good, though. CONGRATULATIONS ON HAVING TWO DIFFERENT GENRES OF POEMS IN ONE POST. :doindadom

[moatism]

CONGRATULATIONS ON HAVING TWO DIFFERENT GENRES OF POEMS IN ONE POST. :doindadom

awesome!!! what do i win?!?! cookies?! or maybe an elephant?!?!?! oh! i'd love a spaceship! so.......what do i win?!?!?! ^_^

[Pipp-ORK]

Grapes= the best thing ever.

Spaceship= cool.

*thinking...*

!!!!!!!

How about a spaceship full of grapes!? ISN'T THAT WONDERFUL!?!?

[moatism]

that'll do just fine!^_^